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diverse
Leave this kid exposed quick, the double meaning of flash
Tired of smoking stupid herbs, now i'm lookin for some hash
kinda weak, an a lil played 4/10

Tried to be creative but there's No Limit to his wackness
Couldn't ever beat me, even if I helped this kid practice
not too bad, wording let you down, 6/10

Pick this fool apart, i.e., scavenger habits of a vulture
trying to cure this newb disease, examined him in a culture
not too bad either, 6/10

Your still new to the board? virgin bout to lose his cherry
I make my words intoxicating, you just leak bloody mary
bad wording let you dwon, nice concept, 6/10

I took it easy on him, but it's over before he even begins
Guess we need newbs to stick around, so we can all up our wins
lol, pretty funny, made me laugh, but average again, 6/10

overall 28/50


flash
this guy steals other peoples wordz as if he were a ~material larcinist~// Flash, i should be called Inferno cause i verbally burn you like a ~serial arsinist//1~
stretched, ok vocab, 5/10

My wordplay and punches are ~infinetly numerous~// punches? bitch in ur last battle you had none and that shit was still ~pathetically humerous~//2
bad wording, flow was off, 4/10

ur spits and complexity is too gross so i'll have to start ~interveanin~// step back Verse and take a lesson from this legendary ~verbal demon~//3
filler, 4/10

No matter how many times this guy posts, hes always ~still ~a~ busta~// dreadin the vote from the beginning so nows hes cumin with a ~fillabusta~//4(thing in politics to dealy a vote)
WTF? use more common language lost me here, 2/10


theze wordz are the only thing Diverse needs to have the ground ~touchin ur knees~// u couldnt post somethin decent if u had eminem ~punchin ur keys~//5
last line i have used te concept, an its pretty played, 4/10

overall 19/50


my vote diverse


plz drop an honest vote on this
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111834

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well my vote goes ta flah, and considering he had 10 lines if ya spread em out, DINNIES
he had better rhyme scheme than the other dude...yo, diverse, try rhyming 2 words at the end of ya line...it will up ya verse a lot..
even though diverse had some good concepts, most of em are played...
flash, ya had a nice verse, different style to what ya battled me with but it is ight..


V...Flash

vote for these thx
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112050
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111844
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111593

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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

lmfao at Jen-aral for saying my style is played and that i don't have a good rhyme scheme....kids are becoming so stupid these days

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vote - diverse...
1. fillabusta....is speakin non-stop...not allowing a person to step in...
^^not a political tacit...

ok....
now as far as punches go- Diverse -had much stronger ones..with better delivery and a personal aspect as well-
flo?...im a have to go wit- Diverse -again...simply worked it better...

This was a merkin, Flash stick wit less not the best-
thats advice
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damn, only one more vote until this battle is finished off...c'mon people i want to get more battles goin, don't sleep.

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