people sleep more than bats on this site...Votes come on!

somone pleez vote on this....its pretty damn frustrating

hell yeah...people wake up and vote on this shit...uppin

my vote is flash b/c he had the only real use of punches......this battle okay, you both could have dropped a lot harder...work on fixing your structures, and make your verses flow nicer...flash takes it with better wordplay, punches and creativity, jen...you just came to basic..look at some elevated and elite battles to help you out....peace.

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whateverr yu say man...^*the good MC**cough*

2-0...keep goin

yo man i would listen tah diverse...he knows what hes talking about...take his advise you be up in the rankins no time

i only joined this site cause my school banned rapmusic.com...the 1 single reason
this one will probably be banned soon aswell..
i dont think i need his advice.

^^^wack mc.....no **cough** whatsoever...don't talk shit, i'll merk you in battle, and if i suck so bad why is my record 23-6 huh? fuckin herb...

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cause ya so dickriden ya fuckin dicks gettin sore....bitch

listen to this fuckin pathetic bitch talk....battle then...see what's up

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Jen aral wins this in my eyes...he had a nice voab that he used effectively...he punched solidly even though he had a few sex lines..they were creative and they hit hard...He sustained his verse throughout except for the last line..it was a weak closer...Flash was cool too..he had an agressive flow but he lacked a lot of the basics..his wordplay was really limited..his multi's were forced and he lacked wit altogether...I gotta give my vote to Jen Aral..He had the punchlines and the basics down..structure multi's meta's ....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112093

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its only 1-1...the otha kid didnt poll vote

As the president of rap yu can serve the wack offence...
When i attack my platoon backs off so yu can have revenge...
weak opener
I wont kill ya...Cause like Flintones we in a concrete jungle...
Yu put on a solid front...But..I know that ure really solomly humble...
whack!
Yu can curse, attack whatever my front lines wont let ya past...
Yur bongage and g-string fetish helps me rip the leather out ya ass...
ehh ok
I head butt walls cause my structure is solid in that way...
Ive fucked ya bodily fluids up cause yu suck and are infact gay...
played
In the call out i said an hour to post back..So whats 25...
Look at tha rules for ya wack ass battle all 20 guys...
ok
This is extravagent in an imagintaive ground...
I am the maximum in this contaminated round...
weak


im given u no props, given u 100 percent disrespect//
ill take shots, bullets from my tech get stuck in ya neck//
take out the //!!
ill sqeeze 5 in ya jersey//
so ull be looken like Jason Kidd from New Jersey//
weak
Look at the Postion ya in, It’s like you Fort is empty//
u do More than Tempt me, ammo? Of course theres Plenty//
whackness
I’m Vicous I close sets, ambitious to Hold Tec’s//
Kill u Overnight you’ll be sleepin wit fishes like Ko-tex//
ehh ok I suppose
In da street, Discreet I dispose threats, I beat ya whole bet//
How u drop a Duece expectin to deafeat my Whole Deck//
ok
Fuck u bru, Make ya Best Decsend, Let em Rest wit Ten//
Ya Breath’ll End, I Leave Backs Wet Like u be Mexican//
lol nice

Jen check out the whackness emergency cenetr dayg for useful battle tips. Flash one this battle. he had better punches in his verse. Both had played lines, but Jen's verse was almost all played lines and filler. Both of yall need to up your creativity and be more original. Vote-Flash

Please take the time to drop an honest vote here. I took the time for yall. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337