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Blackgod 3 100.00%
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Old 02-04-04, 09:15 PM   #1
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I can't vote, because I don't have enough posts but, here's some feedback anyways.

Flow- Blackgod definitly was better in this one. His shit flowed alot better than Bas's.
Blas, your flow was alright, but your structure could use some work.

Punches/Personals- Again Blackgod was better. He had more punches that hit alot
harder than Bas. Bas, your punches were way too simple. Try to
be more creative .Both need to try and use more personals. Bas
had the one personal where he flipped Black's name, but both need
to include more.

Vocab- Blackgod blew him out da' water in this category. Both though, could use
improvement. Bas, your shit was very basic. Try elevating.

Creativity- Blackgod again took it. His punches were alot more creative. Better use of
vocab and concepts. Bas, your punches, were soft, way too simple, and
were played.Not even close in this aspect.

Overall - Blackgod, in my mind, was the clear winner. His punches hit harder, vocab
was better, and showed alot more creativity. Bas187, You should try and
develop your vocab and be a more creative with your punches. Your flow
was alright, but structure needs work. Both should try and use more personals
to become more effective. My vote goes to: Blackgod.
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Old 02-04-04, 09:31 PM   #2
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Punches: Black, had some pretty dope punches, Baz, you take the cup for worst verse ever. Seriously. Not to sound like Simon, but you fucking suck. Learn English, there is no hope of elevation from you. The hitting the street line was pretty dope.
Wordplay: Neither, wasn't any wordplay.
Multis: Black used a few multi syllables, maybe 2's and 3's, good, nothing from Baz.
Personals: Neither, neither had any personals, nobody knows nobody.
Opener: Black, actual verse from Black.
Closer: Black, again, a real verse.

Baz, a punch is a comparison, compare two different things, try using a quote or phrase you mmight make something original.

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