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02-06-04, 12:12 PM | #16 | |||
"The Eleete"
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Thank you all and thank you to Archival for nominating it as Best Open Mic of the month....I appreciate all your words.......^^Uppin^^....peace
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02-06-04, 02:21 PM | #17 | ||||||
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i read this previously but didn't get a chance to say what i felt because i was at school, now i can tell you that everyone else has already said what i would have..it was dope, and you deserved all the good feedback you recieved..i'll look out for you
(and on another note, me and you will have to keep battling to keep Penskills in Legends, i know you feel the same!) |
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02-06-04, 02:22 PM | #18 | ||||||
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Im the one who gave the longest breakdown of an OM in history... On... 'Journey'... Just to try and help get it into Legends... So ya know... :P...
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02-07-04, 01:22 AM | #19 | ||||||
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good piece i liked how ya took a common thing and twisted it. I would really like to see how you deliver it in an audio
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02-07-04, 10:50 AM | #20 | ||||||
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first drop i've seen of yours
pretty good the flow was the standout for me in this.. it just read so smoothly...not many pieces on here that do that the topic was a bit played...and the hacking wrists and shooting yourself thats my only major complaint really..could have improved with originality but the story itself was interesting and the verse held my interest thruout easy reading piece improved as it went on too.. props |
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02-09-04, 01:31 AM | #21 | |||||||
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very dope piece right here. i felt it for real. straight up nice. i think i started
seeing flowers. haha. yeah. excellent expression. its one of those stories that they make movies out of. kinda cool. love the flow and the imagery. very deep. im pretty sure it ain't true tho, seeing as how you're still alive. lol. no matter. still dope. keep at it man. hit this up in return plz. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111616 pz
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02-09-04, 05:23 AM | #22 | |||||
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its been a played topic....but u wrote it diff and thats
always a good thing.....the word choice/vocab could have been better but overall this was a good peice... flow was on key for the majority of the verse but flow can always be improved, the structure always be improved, check out diverses peice "photographs...." and u see some sick struture there the chorus was ehh/// could have been better lyricaly wise but it was also an impact on the overall story. ... drop smore.
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02-10-04, 03:12 PM | #23 | |||
"The Eleete"
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^^Uppin thanks for the 2 votes on OM of the month for this piece!!^^
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02-11-04, 11:45 AM | #24 | |||
"The Eleete"
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^^Uppin Once Again^^
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02-12-04, 11:30 AM | #25 | |||
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^^Hello anyone out there?^^
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02-12-04, 09:30 PM | #26 | ||||||
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I Think You One Of The Few That Can Make It Off Netceeing And I Hope To Read More I Got Mad Faith In You And This Reinstill To Me Hip Hop True Definition
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