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ILLunatic |
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Flow-I Structure-I Finisher-I(neither were too good) Opener-I Vocab-I Complexity-I Vote=ILL But Mythikul You Need Alot Of Work On Your Rhymes I Can Tell ILL Didnt Try Cuz If He Did You Would Of Got Ripped But Vote ILLunatic. ILL Your Shit Wuz Clearly Better You Should Stop Battlin These Whack Kids, Damn Nice Shit Thoe Even Thoe You Didnt Try |
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Okk.....
Every time i go to post... Someone post before me and it fuckes me up....... But thank you for re-typin ya vote Tropisphere UPPIN2
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Mythicul work on ya structure, n flow n im sure ull do betta
ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/ ^ good metaz yo .. kepp it up man Illunatic... letz c... Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt ^ stronggggg u get my vote 4 dat man lol vote - IL
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Uppin 3 ...............................
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ill, im seaking to kill,u floppin still,u call u heat but all u send is a chill/
u a rapper ur a face-for-bags,u a mc u trully a disgrace-to-stages/ this a race-for-ages,u rhymes from a book, just whered u place-the-pages ^three line rhyme scheme this should be good.....its alot multis...ok punches... recycling, your garbage YOU-SPREAD,u spit at me, then y the fuck r YOU-DEAD/ u fall in the polls like "H-DEAN", im a myth but ur SPITs the thing rlly AINT-SEEN/ ^this is just multis are you gonna punch him or?........ ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/ ^this was a good line....lots of multis but a good punch ok wordplay... 2-wrong, definetly not u thats 2-strong, u think u can beat me wit ur blues-song/ ^hmmmm no..... FINISHER*.....<_______NO HEY, UNATIC, call u herb static, way wack sticks-2-u,call u a HO, the way dicks-go-2-u/ comin out of retirment,just 2 cant sent back 2 the WACK-PLACE,ill trace BACK-2-UR-DISGRACE, wit ^this is a bad closer the rhymes scheme is off........also used a sex line....nough said,..... Ya flows an embarassment and ya mainly battle newbies Restricted to MythikuL...wait.. Restricted Who? who's he ^nice personal...punch good setup for punch... Unheard of member, who's been registerd since June of 03 Oh G, i basically insult myself when callin you my homie ^hehe thats nice..gulit by association..... You think your 3rd return makes you rememberable to RB Hardly... even if ya spit razor punches, ya still couldn't harm me ^this has been done.....but its not that bad..... Ya better wish theres life afta death, cuz your death is near MythikuL stepped in fear, already knowin.... The End Is Here ^well this is nice....i like it a fine punch.... Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt ^Nice closer.....a solid verse.....you took it with structure and flow...less multis to distract from your punches good battle though by both...hit up this ill topical guys...RETURN A FAVOR!!!!!!!!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111620 |
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punches-ill
vocab-ill creativity-ill metas-ill flow-ill One sided battle Vote - Illunatic Return the favor in my sig, thanks Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token
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Hmm....
I was wonderin where a win went.. Its all good... UPPIN
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Ok. . .
ill, im seaking to kill,u floppin still,u call u heat but all u send is a chill/ u a rapper ur a face-for-bags,u a mc u trully a disgrace-to-stages/ this a race-for-ages,u rhymes from a book, just whered u place-the-pages ^^^^ Flow Is Off, Horrible Attempts At Punches, Disgrace To Stages Is Played, So Is The Place The Pages Line. . recycling, your garbage YOU-SPREAD,u spit at me, then y the fuck r YOU-DEAD/ u fall in the polls like "H-DEAN", im a myth but ur SPITs the thing rlly AINT-SEEN/ ^^^^First Line Was Weak, So Was The 2nd Line. . Your Structure Is Horrid. . First Line Didn't Make Sense Either. . Where's The Strong Shit At ? ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/ ^^^^First Line Sucked, Straight Up. . I'm Being Brutally Honest. . The Second Line Was Below Average At Best And The Asking 4 Questions Part Still Wasn't A Punch. 2-wrong, definetly not u thats 2-strong, u think u can beat me wit ur blues-song/ ^^^^Ok. . Best Atempt At A Punch So Far. . FINISHER* HEY, UNATIC, call u herb static, way wack sticks-2-u,call u a HO, the way dicks-go-2-u/ comin out of retirment,just 2 cant sent back 2 the WACK-PLACE,ill trace BACK-2-UR-DISGRACE, wit lines like that, ur the sweet-victory w.o the TRUE-TASTE (think bout it) ^^^^True Taste Line Is Played. . Still No Good PUnches Man. . What The Fuck Happened. . You Leave The PUnches In Your Mind ? Bad Verse, No Flow, Structure, Or Punches. Ya flows an embarassment and ya mainly battle newbies Restricted to MythikuL...wait.. Restricted Who? who's he ^^^^Flow And Structure ! I've Been Looking For These Things, Good Punch To Open Up. Unheard of member, who's been registerd since June of 03 Oh G, i basically insult myself when callin you my homie ^^^^Multi's. . Flow. . Decent Punch. . You're Already Beatin' Him 2 Punches To 0 You think your 3rd return makes you rememberable to RB Hardly... even if ya spit razor punches, ya still couldn't harm me ^^^^Razor Punches Played. . But Still A Decent Punch. . Ya better wish theres life afta death, cuz your death is near MythikuL stepped in fear, already knowin.... The End Is Here ^^^Multi's And Flow Again. . Strong. . Punch Was Below Average Tho Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt ^^^^Nice Closer, Tho Played As Fuck. . I Said Shit Similar To That 2 Years Ago. . Decent Enough. Goddamn, I Actually Broke A Battle Down. . Overall. . Battles = Punches . . So. . . Vote = ILLunatic. Pz.
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