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ILLunatic 5 100.00%
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Old 02-02-04, 11:19 PM   #16
Sir Q. Layshun
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Punches-I
Flow-I
Structure-I
Finisher-I(neither were too good)
Opener-I
Vocab-I
Complexity-I
Vote=ILL

But Mythikul You Need Alot Of Work On Your Rhymes I Can Tell ILL Didnt Try Cuz If He Did You Would Of Got Ripped But Vote ILLunatic. ILL Your Shit Wuz Clearly Better You Should Stop Battlin These Whack Kids, Damn Nice Shit Thoe Even Thoe You Didnt Try
 
Old 02-02-04, 11:22 PM   #17
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Okk.....
Every time i go to post...
Someone post before me
and it fuckes me up.......
But thank you for re-typin ya vote Tropisphere

UPPIN2
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Old 02-02-04, 11:27 PM   #18
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Mythicul work on ya structure, n flow n im sure ull do betta

ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR
change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/
^ good metaz yo .. kepp it up man

Illunatic... letz c...

Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help
Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt
^ stronggggg

u get my vote 4 dat man

lol

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Old 02-02-04, 11:46 PM   #19
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Uppin 3
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Old 02-02-04, 11:54 PM   #20
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ill, im seaking to kill,u floppin still,u call u heat but all u send is a chill/
u a rapper ur a face-for-bags,u a mc u trully a disgrace-to-stages/
this a race-for-ages,u rhymes from a book, just whered u place-the-pages
^three line rhyme scheme this should be good.....its alot multis...ok punches...
recycling, your garbage YOU-SPREAD,u spit at me, then y the fuck r YOU-DEAD/
u fall in the polls like "H-DEAN", im a myth but ur SPITs the thing rlly AINT-SEEN/
^this is just multis are you gonna punch him or?........
ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR
change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/
^this was a good line....lots of multis but a good punch ok wordplay...
2-wrong, definetly not u thats 2-strong, u think u can beat me wit ur blues-song/
^hmmmm no.....

FINISHER*.....<_______NO

HEY, UNATIC, call u herb static, way wack sticks-2-u,call u a HO, the way dicks-go-2-u/
comin out of retirment,just 2 cant sent back 2 the WACK-PLACE,ill trace BACK-2-UR-DISGRACE, wit
^this is a bad closer the rhymes scheme is off........also used a sex line....nough said,.....


Ya flows an embarassment and ya mainly battle newbies
Restricted to MythikuL...wait.. Restricted Who? who's he
^nice personal...punch good setup for punch...
Unheard of member, who's been registerd since June of 03
Oh G, i basically insult myself when callin you my homie
^hehe thats nice..gulit by association.....
You think your 3rd return makes you rememberable to RB
Hardly... even if ya spit razor punches, ya still couldn't harm me
^this has been done.....but its not that bad.....
Ya better wish theres life afta death, cuz your death is near
MythikuL stepped in fear, already knowin.... The End Is Here
^well this is nice....i like it a fine punch....
Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help
Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt

^Nice closer.....a solid verse.....you took it with structure and flow...less multis to distract from your punches good battle though by both...hit up this ill topical guys...RETURN A FAVOR!!!!!!!!!

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Old 02-03-04, 02:58 PM   #21
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punches-ill
vocab-ill
creativity-ill
metas-ill
flow-ill
One sided battle

Vote - Illunatic

Return the favor in my sig, thanks

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Old 02-04-04, 09:15 PM   #22
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Hmm....
I was wonderin where a win went..
Its all good... UPPIN
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Old 02-04-04, 09:39 PM   #23
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Ok. . .

ill, im seaking to kill,u floppin still,u call u heat but all u send is a chill/
u a rapper ur a face-for-bags,u a mc u trully a disgrace-to-stages/
this a race-for-ages,u rhymes from a book, just whered u place-the-pages
^^^^ Flow Is Off, Horrible Attempts At Punches, Disgrace To Stages Is Played, So Is The Place The Pages Line. .
recycling, your garbage YOU-SPREAD,u spit at me, then y the fuck r YOU-DEAD/
u fall in the polls like "H-DEAN", im a myth but ur SPITs the thing rlly AINT-SEEN/
^^^^First Line Was Weak, So Was The 2nd Line. . Your Structure Is Horrid. . First Line Didn't Make Sense Either. . Where's The Strong Shit At ?
ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR
change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/
^^^^First Line Sucked, Straight Up. . I'm Being Brutally Honest. . The Second Line Was Below Average At Best And The Asking 4 Questions Part Still Wasn't A Punch.
2-wrong, definetly not u thats 2-strong, u think u can beat me wit ur blues-song/
^^^^Ok. . Best Atempt At A Punch So Far. .

FINISHER*

HEY, UNATIC, call u herb static, way wack sticks-2-u,call u a HO, the way dicks-go-2-u/
comin out of retirment,just 2 cant sent back 2 the WACK-PLACE,ill trace BACK-2-UR-DISGRACE, wit
lines like that, ur the sweet-victory w.o the TRUE-TASTE (think bout it)
^^^^True Taste Line Is Played. . Still No Good PUnches Man. . What The Fuck Happened. . You Leave The PUnches In Your Mind ? Bad Verse, No Flow, Structure, Or Punches.


Ya flows an embarassment and ya mainly battle newbies
Restricted to MythikuL...wait.. Restricted Who? who's he
^^^^Flow And Structure ! I've Been Looking For These Things, Good Punch To Open Up.
Unheard of member, who's been registerd since June of 03
Oh G, i basically insult myself when callin you my homie
^^^^Multi's. . Flow. . Decent Punch. . You're Already Beatin' Him 2 Punches To 0
You think your 3rd return makes you rememberable to RB
Hardly... even if ya spit razor punches, ya still couldn't harm me
^^^^Razor Punches Played. . But Still A Decent Punch. .
Ya better wish theres life afta death, cuz your death is near
MythikuL stepped in fear, already knowin.... The End Is Here
^^^Multi's And Flow Again. . Strong. . Punch Was Below Average Tho
Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help
Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt
^^^^Nice Closer, Tho Played As Fuck. . I Said Shit Similar To That 2 Years Ago. . Decent Enough.

Goddamn, I Actually Broke A Battle Down. . Overall. .

Battles = Punches . . So. . . Vote = ILLunatic. Pz.
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