Really nice battle ya'll...

Tight wordplay and some good personals...
By Technician.
Flow was on mark...nice touch on the multi's.
But the punches lacked for me...
Toilet and feces lines are played...
So is the "Elite let you in/LLL let you in"
Whatever.

On the other hand...

Wise lit this up, I thought.
Great current event on the "scam stocks" line.
(Martha Stewart, for those out of touch with the news)
Some say they have, but I've never heard the "Superman" line...
Very tight and funny to me.
But the killer, the sealer of the dealer, the best punch of the battle...
(and I say this regretfully, cuz I hate visual effects in battle usually)
Is the "prom date" one.
That had me having to close my office door when I saw the pic.

For more quotables and for making me laugh outloud.

Wise Ways

__________________
Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

Pretty Close Battle, But I Think That Wise Ways Edged It...He Had Some Nice Personals And Some Nice Punches...Both Came Hard And Spit Fire, But Wise Edged It...

Props To Both...Good Battle...

VOTE=WISE WAYS

Vote unexplained. Vote gone. -Token

LoL please, ive been on RB for awhile, i use to post under the name rare one.... I posted here back in shadows day.


Quit swaying votes..

__________________

cool............uppn thanks for voting........................

__________________
<Center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>.:Corrupted Visions:.</table></Center>

wise ways
you had that ill personal, about his prom date, tht made me laugh. other than that you didin't have any really strong, hard hitting punches like i would of expected you to, structure was a lil of an metas were ok.

technician
you had a few nice personals, an nearly every one of your punches hit, you didn't ome as strong as i thought, wordplay was ok, an metas were good. nice battle.


vote- tech
better verse, more hardhitinng punhes!!


plz try an drop an honest vote obn the battles in my sig, 1 or either, thnks

__________________
<center><img src=http://www.rhymevantage.com/forum/attachment.php?s=&postid=6921=1 border=0></center>

flow-wise
punches-tie
style-wise
wordplay-tie
personals-tech
creativity-tie
overall-wise

Wise your flow was pretty good, then got a lil choppy near the end, the disses/punches were aight, lil witty. Tech your flow was aight, culd of been better, the punches were ok..not witty at all but a lil creative. But i think wise came more original..vote-wise

fav lines wise-..lol good wordin, funny punch...
tech- good flow, and wrdplay, not a bad punch


drop an honest on my battle with blend when he posts
or ghostie in the sig
thanks.

wise-decent spit, nice flow, pretty good punches, superman one is kinda played out but overall punches were not bad. personals were good in your verse, took advantage of his sig and shit that was good as well...

tech-you came with some pretty decent punches as well, flow was equally rivaled to WW but i felt that you were lacking in the personals department...had you gotten a little more personal (your opener was nice though) i think you would have taken it but wise just presented a more all aroud verse in this battle....

v/wise ways...props to both though

__________________
<img src="http://www.rhymevantage.com/forum/attachment.php?s=&postid=7548">

................................
................................

up................................................ ..................

__________________
<Center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>.:Corrupted Visions:.</table></Center>

Uppin..................................#3
..........................................

Yo who is this pretty pink pussy wearing a damn thong?
You wan't proof? This fruitcake's gots quotes for cam'ron
^its an Ok personal not the best way to open but it works.....
This fuck gets hit with damn rocks & cut like lamb chops
And Wise'll drop Technician way faster than scam stocks
^nice multied punch here with good wordplay i liked it....
Ya mixed up..
Twisted like u either a herb or a n00b but couldn't choose
Punches leave u helpless like superman w/out a phone booth
^bahhah a classic....nice meta4....good punch........
Kids into incest..
& yeah..I Know for a fact..but lets see what his mom say
Oh wait..She ain't gonna say shit..she was his prom date!
^this didn't hit as hard as you wanted it too....i was just confused...
Ya elevation's funny!....
Tha shit took a downfall..I'm higher than u..& u on cloud 420
Really lightweight..cuz I ate him in seconds,wasn't even hungry
U nothing...
^ok personal again but this one has been done b4.....

Accepting tha callout?better think it through..ya king of fools
T's got no use..This Technician dosen't even have any tools!
^this has been done before too...borderline played....overall a couple good punches with ok personal but some recycled material...........



We collabed... over aim the keys straight banged it out ....
& now that shit's up... you do nothin' but drag it down!
^good wordplay....a nice punch good opener....
Shit son... now i might look bad... it's all thanks to this ....
Wisdom?... kids punches are sad... surprised LLL sanctioned you!
^meh i don't prefer the Icon and LLL punches are past there time....
Wise Ways...climbs for days..still cant reach where Tech finds his place ...
Rewind his taste ...find his pace... so whack his rhymes beyond Third Base!
^this was alot of multis but the punch came pretty weak at the end...
Doesn't show is location... even the hometown's ashamed of this cat ...
Name in Wits End roatation?...did lots of ass kissing b4 they gave him that!
^This bar has two OK punches in it...not really what i was expectin tech...
We battled kinda recent... so I thought that you'd drop a 1/4 of heat shit ....
But the only time you acheive it...involves some toilet water and feces!
^ok this is a bathroom humor punch....and its ok.....overall no punches really stood out except for you opener....good use of multis ...your personals ended up hitting a lil weaker than you thought they might.....I think Wise edged ya.....no hate pz good battle dogs....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111942
^both of you plz....thanx......

Flow:Tie, you both had a really good flow going in both the verses.so i really can't choose one over the other in this case

Punches:Punches also close but i think tech had the harder punches here...he barely got the upper hand in punches in my opinion

Vocab:Tie, both of you guyz had a good chose of words that u used in ur verses so i can't pick between ne of you when it comes to who has the better vocab.

Structure:Tech had a better structure, it was more complex in my opinion but Wise had a good structure as well,still not good enuff for him too get my vote.
ne wayz good battle enjoyed it
Vote:Tech

Your vote is garbage, didn't mention anything from the verses, this can be used as any vote.
-Axe

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom