To me a battle consists of two things mainly, and that is flow and punchlines but ofcourse intelligence, wording, vocab, technique and wittiness also come into the equation, so first is the flow and i felt that dev edged this one barely, but his punchlines outshone outcome, there wasn't really any amazing wording nor vocab or wittiness in this battle, i would have say some intelligence did show from both, ofcourse, lol, on the real dev had this through better quality pucnhlines and maintaining a good flow, pz

V/Dev

This is how I see it.

Flow=Dev, I had to give this one to Dev, both had okay flow but Dev's was much easier to read than Out's. Some of Out's line's were just to stretched.

Punches=Dev, he had some funny shit in there, and his punches just hit harder. Out, you had some okay shit, I just didn't think that they hit as hard.

Personals=Tie, I liked both of these verses in the personals catagory, you both had some good personals so it's a tie.

Vocab=Tie, I think you both had some okay vocab, it's not as good as it could have been, but you both had enough vocab to get the job done in this one.

Over all=Dev, you had some good punches and personals, your vocab could have been a bit better but it was still okay, and your flow was good as well. I liked this drop it was a good read and made me laugh a few times, it was a good drop, keep it up.
Out, you had an okay verse, you had some okay punches, and you had some good personals, your vocab was okay but could be improved upon, your flow needs some work mostly in structure because of the stretched lines but over all it was a good verse, keep at it and everything will pull together.

Vote=Dev

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Ok. . .

OutCome - I Wasn't Feeling Your Verse At All, Too Many Played Lines, Bold Was Annoying. . Only Good Punch That Actually Hit Were The Two Hemisphere Lines, Flow Was OK, Structure Was Fine, Vocab Was Pretty Good IN The First Couple Of Lines But THen You Went Downhill. . Opener Sucked Bad Ones, Wack Masterubation Line Is Played As Fucking Fuck. . Closer Was Bad Too. . Gaaah, Played. . Your Verse Seemed Like A Park For Kids. . I Know You Got Better. . You Had Better Personals Than Dev. . You Win One Catergory. . Woot.

Best :

knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
^^^ Nice. . Only Decent Punch You Had. .

Dev - More Creativity, Hella Nice Structure, Flow Was On-Point. . And Here's The Key To This Whole Better. . BETTER PUNCHES. . Permanent Leak Line Is Mad Played But Still A Bit Funny. . Your Closer Was Horrible And Played. . But That's The Only Two Complaints I Have. . Maybe Could've Included More Personals To Match OutCome's, Bu It Was Blind, So No Hate. . 2nd Line Was Nice, How You Flipped His Sig, Good Stuff. . Punches Should Win Battles, Although That's Not THe Case Here Sometimes. . Glad To See People Noticing. .

Best :

And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
^^^ Haha, Nice.

Vote - Dev.

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Honestly... the structure was a bit off
The BOLD was gay as fuck......
When you bold some of ya verse....
It makes it look like shit..
Ya punches were decent...
Personals were weak.. flow was decent
Overall..........10/20




Better....
Punches hit harder than OutCome's
Personals were decent.... some played
A few of the lines were played.. but it happens
Flow was pretty good...
Structure was better than OutCome's also
Overall........13/20


V/Dev
Came a lil harder
Verse looked better
ect...




ILLunatic v.s wordplay

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