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02-10-04, 08:01 AM
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IP: A965 0752
Dope... what more can I say?... Loved the concept. Great choice of words and good flow. Excellent creativity..nice imagery. You OM's are always a pleasure to read..very thought provoking..keep up the good work!
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02-10-04, 02:33 PM
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IP: 40D6 EBC3
Thanks^...
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02-12-04, 12:15 PM
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IP: 6EB7 0673
Free this piece of writin was dope i was feelin it all the way.......i see you have improved rapidly since ur first open mic....on this 1 u had a nice flow gud wordplay and as i always say i love ya structure its dope the way u have 1 little line on its own so it stands out this was a dope piece overall no need 4 more explanation.......
fav line is: Where would we be without it.. There would be no more room for creation The best thing we ever did... ... Was make pen and paper a combination ^^^^this line was the best in the whole open mic 4 me loved it nice drop keep droppin
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