Carson - personals were on point.. picked on erry aspect.. turned em into nice punches.. felt u were consistant thru out.. nice closer.. got a chuckle.. overall a pretty dope verse..

Ace - no quotables to speak of.. didnt like the style cos it kinda killed the flow.. yes the punches were witty but wordplay was weak.. some of those lines really let the rest down.. and the closer jus didnt really close it.

VoTe = Carson

More enjoyable read.. nice flow.. an consistant.

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Ace? Who? I aint even spell this herbs name right..
Why? to make an example...that summin's missin from tight
^This is an OK opener a personal and a punch......
Check his AIM, "jet..drop wack..I wanna win" shits a sinch
fuk talent...he's more worried bout digits than Meryl Linch
^ok personals ......and some wordplay......not bad.....
Shit makes me cringe, Ace your even part of a Voting ring?
Yeh, Check the sig...Your part of a dislexic Edicuis Inc.
^ooo nice play off the name.....good personal...ok punch...
Askin for 10 minutes, shit it's obviouse u got pre-writtin's
Get ir right, girly...get outta here and in my kitchen...
^heheh funny but just an ok punch....
It's only fittin...Your gettin your's due, Yes I mean clowned
The eye's in you avatar aint the only thing rolling around...
^and an Ok personal to finish it....not bad overall....creative...

Settle this case..& ill make it known son ur stupidddddddd..
8 d's why..?
Because i wanna make You last......as long as u did..
^ok personal.....fine punch..good opener...
Nothin....guess what? a synonym for you is just that..
& nothin is what i expect..
But u'll beat the odds &..... wont live up to that..
^hmm good wordplay....nice punch...
So ha ha ha..at ur ass, see how simple text can be?
& yes u are..Far more simple then that...
But showin off is nothin to be proud of see..
^meh this bar was pretty weak.....
Been waitin' Excuses & shit to stall..got to eat? get lost..
C://Windows/...
.........I'll do Rb a favor & leave ur Cookies tossed..
^creative a good punch......
Avy pranks, real stunnin' there Kid..i mean yeah ur shit..
Just got in Elite..
Quote:
By:Chrit
I say just add him
Kids been around forever.
If he comes weak boot him[/B]

So prepare to get kicked out of it!
^strong finisher....

you both came nice but in the end i have to give this one to ..........blah this is tough....I think i'll give this one to carson this time around because although Ace threw a bit stronger punches i think Carson came with more constitantly creative lines...good battle to you both...no hate ...check out my crew battle...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112739

these verses were the worst by both sides ever....but imma give it to ace because he had good personals and consistent punches....all effective.....i might not understand carsons verse good enuff though but i thought aces was better....the personals were nice and definitely had impact, also the closer ace dropped won it for him...killed him

punches: ace
personals:ace
flow: tie
opener: carson
closer: ace (nice closer)