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02-12-04, 12:24 PM | #16 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
uppin.............................................
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02-12-04, 01:31 PM | #17 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
uppin for votes.........................................
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02-12-04, 01:58 PM | #18 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
damn how many times i got to up this for you fucks to vote?
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02-12-04, 02:07 PM | #19 |
Flyweight
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IP: F596 9C85
:-) took this with his opening 4 bars.. his flow and multi structure was far superb.. as far as disses.. flash had some nice original disses, without much content or punch power behind them.. as to where :-) had some witty lines.. a few kool ones but mostly a steady flow to help them along.. a little more advanced and he hit a little harder.. so vote-:-) return an honest vote plz no hate or beef
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113774 |
02-12-04, 02:19 PM | #20 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 605D CA3E
This was an aight battle
Smiley had a gud flow with a gud wordplay, need more variation tho, your punches were also gud with nice multis, you need to work a bit on your personals, structure was aight flash: your flow was a little bit of cuz I didn't felt your rhymes, you had sum ok punches but they didn't came hard as smiley's, you also need to elevate on your personals cuz I hardly saw any, you had a ok structure, you also need to work on voc. Vote: smiley Vote on this thx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596
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02-12-04, 02:33 PM | #21 | |
Rare One
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IP: 283B 08F8
i know that you or your boy dont need to be talkin trash
both you play your skin flutes so much you got milk mustashes heh, alright opening...the concept was decent i suppose. punch wasnt that bad you call yourself the best but you aint numba 1 or even the best there just aint no way you gonna be winning this rap contest eh, not hard at all.. lacks punchs and good metaphors and the fact remains wen i pull out da glock,ya'll betta dash ya motha should a left u wen she found u in da trash weak.. lacks strength and metaphors.. You cant handle my metafives or duck my punch lines Ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time concept was alright. couldhave had more direction and strength Fuck the vocab. before I burst like a bubble You know if you start to mess with me there is gonna be trouble weak. You need to diss your opponent, you need strength in your punchs My lyrics are like AIDS cuz they spread for sure Don’t try 2 mess wit me cuz there wont be any cure weak. concept is played bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch Ya lack-the-wits, my voice boomin like I'm clappin-clips Metaphor was alright.. needed more of a punch though You wouldn't hold hot rhymes if you grabbed-my-lips endign was alright but for a battle it could have been more. metaphor and concept was good. other than that, it lacked alot for a battle everytime your voice gets SPOKE IN TRACKS, people just break out in OPEN LAUGHS, your the biggest JOKE IN RAP alright opening.. straight punchs.. but could have been alot harder a verse of yours is bout as advanced as lyrics written by mc hammer after SMOKIN CRACK your brain must have BROKE AN SMASHED, not that good of a bar... the punch is alright i suppose.. metaphor is eh, jsut needed a litle more in it or either as a child you got dropped on your MIND PLATE cuz your logic just doesnt LINE STRAIGHT punchs could have been better. metaphor is alright.. lacks direction you could obtain a higher IQ than yours by testing a PRIME APE youll never FIND PAPES (dollars) alright punch.. concept is good but needed a little more with strength in your bar, yea mean? matter of fact youll always BE WACK kid couldnt get a "buzz" of your raps by stickin your lyrics in a den of BEESWAX follow through is to streched, needed to cut that down and better your follow for it. metaphor was alright i suppose you cant COMPETE, and you've never battled a respectable rapper and had them BEAT your WEAK, your lyrics written on SHEETS are like "ice cream cones" cuz they melt when in the contact of HEAT needed to have a better flow here to make this dope.. multi is alright except the punch lacked strength beating me is something you dont have a SAFE CHANCE IN your should follow your avy and just stick to BREAK DANCING ok ending,the personal was an alright shot. could have been slightly better Over all your verse had some alright multis, and metaphors strength and direction of punchs though needed more in them i thought. Vote- Took itwith better punchs more consistant and alright metaphors.
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02-12-04, 02:51 PM | #22 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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2 more votes and i get the win.. uppin for more votes
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02-12-04, 04:14 PM | #23 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
2 more votes for the ko...................................
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02-12-04, 04:15 PM | #24 |
Flyweight
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IP: F596 9C85
i voted on 2 of your battles.. u think u can peep the one i got up..?
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02-12-04, 05:11 PM | #25 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
uppin so this shit can get closed...........................
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02-12-04, 06:18 PM | #26 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
vote dickheads......................................... ....
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02-12-04, 06:24 PM | #27 | |
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IP: 40D6 EBC3
Smilie takes this battle...
He had nice multis... Good hard hitting punches... And a quite nice personal closer which hit hard... Your structure was fucked though as usual... Lol... Thats the only thing flash takes... Structure... Not close... Not a merk... Somewhere between there... v/ Smilie Hit this up or a wont be happy with you... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113832 Thanks... Pz... |
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02-12-04, 06:39 PM | #28 | |
Flyweight
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IP: EB27 E87F
Here it is.
Flow=Flash, his flow was better because of messed up structure. Punches= he had more punches that were harder hitting. Flash you should work on developing your punches. Personals= he had more personals than Flash and they were just better. Vocab=Tie, neither of you really had great vocab in this battle, you should both work on it, good vocab can help you out a lot. Over all= , you had some good punches in this battle, your structure was a bit messed up but that never wins a battle unless it's very close, but you should still work on it, keep working at it and it'll all come around. Flash, your structure was much better in this battle but you need to work on your punches and personals, they are the key to winning battles, just work on developing those and I think you'd have a better chance at winning, keep it up and you should get there. Vote= Can you two give honest votes on my battles thanks. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625 |
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