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02-13-04, 04:57 PM
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^thanx man. much appreciation. keep'em coming.
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02-13-04, 06:04 PM
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Nice drop good flow and very nice vocab and i know you prolly seen this b4 but you need more imagery if give more details in stories it makes'em stand out and takin to the place or thing you talkin bout nice drop anyway tho
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02-14-04, 11:47 AM
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^thanx man. i appreciate it. i didn't want to make
this too long so i left out lines of imagery. i just felt like telling a story. but i'll keep that in mind. keep'em comin' pz
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02-14-04, 11:55 AM
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yea this ws pretty good...nuttin more i can really say...lookin forward to some more of your drops
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02-14-04, 01:09 PM
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tight style keep them coming and wit the support its a must you do.
check you out later sharks |
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02-16-04, 03:52 AM
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thanx peepz. i got my name changed cuz im starting
to take this account more serious than i thought i wuld. keep'em coming.
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02-18-04, 01:44 AM
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lemme up this for you dog
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