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Young 5 Mic(s) 3 37.50%
Daffer22 5 62.50%
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Old 02-12-04, 01:16 PM   #16
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young mic took this battle.. i like your style you have a different style than most of the people ive seen on this board.. daffer you had some elementary wordplay.. that line bout given your dad head was weak.. and i didnt see any creative disses in your verse

young 5 mics you had alot of mulites in your verse.. and you tied them in well with your disses.. i like that line bout you have more no shows than years than george burns was alive

ultimately- i judged this battle based on creativty of the disses and impact of the disses.. therefore my vote goes to young 5 mics on this one


Least someone caught my flow...hardhitter wants to take his vote back but i don't think u can do it but that's life...i just can't play around with anyone no more and go hard everytime...
 
Old 02-12-04, 01:30 PM   #17
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Yo Young he wants his vote removed on your battle with Oakley he says not on this battle.....
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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
 
Old 02-12-04, 02:20 PM   #18
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this was very one sided battle..
Daffer22 ur verse was good...punches came hard and flow was there...struture was basic... work on dat...needed some personals tho...overalll: 7/10
Young 5 Mic(s)
Ur verse was basic...punches came very week...no flow and structure well there was none was there....evaluate plaese.....overall: 3/10
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Old 02-12-04, 03:04 PM   #19
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upppinggg votessss (3)
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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
 
Old 02-12-04, 04:14 PM   #20
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ok I think da vote goes to Young, he had better metaphors, wordplay.
Daffer had a basic structure and vocabulary, work on ya vocabulary...
Daffer, try to hit harder and more personal with ya punches...
Flow was decent on both sides, young, just don't use that many caps and shit.
vote - Young
 
Old 02-13-04, 10:42 AM   #21
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uppppping votesssss(4)
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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
 
Old 02-13-04, 01:00 PM   #22
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Old 02-13-04, 01:07 PM   #23
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Daffer= Winner

Daffer= Ok Punches, Hit HIm Soso, Vocab Wasnt Too Good, Structure Was Ok, You Can Shorten You Lines To Make It More Enjoyable Feel Me? Your Wordplay Was Good And Creativity Was OK. Flow Was Decent

Young= Ok Punches, Lot OF Them Missed, Same As Him With Vocab, Didnt Do Soo Good Wit Wordplay. Your Creativity Was Good, And Your Structure Was Long Too And Dont CAPS The PUnch or Rhyming Word In Your Verse. Flow Was Decent

Young
Punches= C+
Flow= B
Wordplay- A-
Vocab- C
Creativity- A-
Overall Grade= B-/C+

Daffer
Punches- B-
Flow= B
Creativity- C
Structure- B
Vocab- B
Wordplay- B+
Overall Grade- B

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113660
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Old 02-13-04, 03:41 PM   #24
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Yo Ill Testament you forgot to poll it, so it's 4-2 for me
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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
 
Old 02-13-04, 03:45 PM   #25
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Alright i think daffer killed the comp here...just overall better flow better style and structure...just overall seemed like you understand how to write more.young i didnt feel your style to much but it wasnt horrible your on the right track...some eghhh alright disses nice work...

please return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113957
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Old 02-13-04, 03:59 PM   #26
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so I win 5-2, mod can you close this battle?
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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
 
Old 02-13-04, 04:09 PM   #27
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just to play safe, I need one more vote so upiiingg votes (5)
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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
 
Old 02-13-04, 04:26 PM   #28
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yo daffer u came real weak in this battle, bad vocab, and no wordplay, u cant jus win a battle cus u goin agianst a newbie, elevate and maybe bring sumin to the table instead of jus gettin served

young 5 mic, good word play, even tho it was pretty gay wit the leadin back to mcdonalds but that was good wordplay anyway. u really need ta work on your structure and topics but your punches and multi's and wordply win this.

vote-young 5 mic
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