under stand the word play, comon u gotta be kiddin me timeless maybe i'd understand it if u had some. shit u didnt have any multi's and fuckin rhymed line with rhyme and bit wit spit. yo shit is over played, but i stil have ta give this one ta ya cus your fuckin battlin a newbie and his shit sum how came even weaker, u need ta stop thinkin jus bout your record and elevate and battle sum comp.

ill mist cat, u had some vocab but u need ta rhyme wit them, like u said some big words u could put some muti's wit, but u just rhymed da usuals and kept it elementary.
u had much better word play then the other guy, but your punches were still weak, u'd beat this cat if u new the ropes a lil more, cus of the word play and the punches will come, jus gotta get a better idea to what sounds good and what voters find dumb.

vote-timeless even tho he a pussy and battles for his record.

sum hate, but someone get a last vote on my battle, shits been gettin slept on, drop a link and i'll get chu a vote and some input

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426

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