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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
LyRiKaL03 1 33.33%
KiLLa_CaLi 2 66.67%
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Old 02-13-04, 01:55 AM   #16
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shit definetly not lopsided dis shits close,


killa kali

your a Baby Like Huey I'm playin your Game.. So getta Clue See
I could be Known as the Wackest Rapper, and still be better then You G
````good multi, but didn't tie in the baby huey thang wit the punch
I'm Curly so Sue Me and when i ask if your Wack.. your answeres Usually
Beat your Face Redder then a Ruby..Like a Bee Reproducin your the New-b
````good muliti, good wordplay wit the Curly sue, but agian weak punch
Un-CLEAR your Flows Misty Better yet described as the Word Mystical..
Your Blind to what Rap really is..so you cover it up with the name Lyrical
````not very good, wordplay didnt make up for the weak punch in this one
before i even posted your Swaying Just Like my Nuts Above You..
T-bag you suck dude..Have a Baby with Youself cuz i Said Fuck You..
````nice simily, i get it how he was talkin before u spit, so decent punch. and alright word play wit the fuck u have a baby part
Your verse makes Me Honeslty Laugh On..your whole Concepts Rap Wrong
Your justa whore for R.b to Gain Wins like a Bitch that Players Pass On..
```good punch decent finisher
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Anit this some shit how this rookie gon go up against a vet//
hold on ...... i tell yo lines wack azz fuck an i anit even seen them yet//
````good word play and multi, nice punch, but u a newb so obvious untrue
im tha type of pimp that ah just walk pass ya chick and make her blush//
then five mins later im like jay-z all up in that funk that sweet that nasty that gushy stuff//( THINK ABOUT IT)
`````good self exalt, smooth, no multi, but good
me and my niggaz own tha street so we stay committed//
wit glock tha will pop off like small bras on some big tities// (OH NO)
````nice original simily, funny, could rhyme good if said correctly so i'll give it ta ya
and tha hoes u roll wit they anit my type//
i only use them chick azz taste tester for my pipe// (DAMN)
````weak, didnt like this punch, and controdicted earlier punch
I got somethin on my waist and i call it my buscit//
quick tha ditch it//<<< when i hit u wit somethin exsplizit//

im done spittin at this bitch//
i hope yo style not ice cold, cause i spit heat that will melt it ta liquid//(itz ova)

decent finisher, good multi, work on the flow tho

vote- Lyrical, had better punches, could work on flow and muti's killa kali beat u on, but punches one this and that blush, gooshy stuff, exatlin line.

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Old 02-14-04, 03:13 AM   #17
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killa kali:your opener was ayite, the last line made it good, and just a little humorous.
your punches were pretty good for the most part, a few were played , but they all hit pretty hard...your use of multiples could've been a little stronger, but they flowed ayite, no metaphors....you had some wordplay..nice touch with the curly" line ....your closer was structure nice, it flowed wel, and the punch hit prety hard as well..you can still improve though.....

lyrikal03:your opener wasn't bad, the structure was decent, but misspelling words is a no-no, also the punch was a little played..try being more creative. your punches weren't all there, they were played simple, and hit really soft, its like you weren't taking this battle seriously....you tried using multiples, but it didn't work out so well, you had no metaphors or wordplay...so on to the closer.......was just bad, it was so played, you need to build your vocab, and just battle a lot more....

vote:killa kali
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