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4 | 44.44% |
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02-13-04, 04:51 PM
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aight i think that lyric got thsi with more consistant punches and better wordplay and vocab
also the flow was better and the structure was way better oakley came with elementary shit and lyric came nice his punches were more direct and hit way harder v/lyric hit up the battle in my sig...need one more |
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02-13-04, 05:08 PM
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IP: 7A5E D5B8
Wow with all my respect & stuff..this was pretty weak..
Anyways, on with the breakdowns.. Oakley Frame was good, content a little less. Simplistic..some ok (attempts at times) at personals.. Fairly decent punches..nothin outstandin'. I dont know who you are really.. So yea if ur droppin' quick & half assed..show more effort.. & if this was just a regular battle verse for you, Elevate.. add complexity in form of wordplay etc.. Wasnt to bad..like i said some ok punches but it lacked creativity. lyric I didnt really like your verse...very..well..FL-ish.. You where just statin' facts or concludin' things, Nothin really punchin you opponent..also no signs of wordplay etc..whatsoever.. You definately need to focus on your punches more, & just need to leave out irrelevant shit. No to good..but no to bad either..pretty mediocre..at best, Though.. Ok. vote Oak - for better punches basically.. |
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02-13-04, 05:19 PM
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Oak
This kid's a moron, and I'm being modest... His avi's his idea of portraying an artist/1 nice opening.. the personal was good... 7/10 seriously, he sit's an votes like he's hardcore.. but goes to the WEC for punches n metiphores?../2 lmao.. true shit, alot people act tough when they vote but then ask for all this help on wack shit... 8.5/10 Why not elevated? Oh wait, that's right you'd get beat.. You aint got enuff Arson'ill to be say your Elite/3(sig) wordplay was good.. i like it.. 6/10 Even Hottie said it, IJL? ya'll aren't respected... Don't you understand, your prone to clownish efforts/4 not really feelin the rhyme... but it was a good punch .. 5/10 An what's up wit your title sayin "don't fuck with me"? Please... Your only talents hiding underrated's anal beads/5 lol.. nice closing.. 8.5/10 Overall - 35/50 Lyric Oak spoke too soon,Now he's in Doub jeopardy and screwed Q: This is a herbbish move... ...A: What is Oakley callin out the IJL crew lol.. u just called ya crew herbs basically...wack opening.. 0/10 You said you'd 5-0 both me and UnderRated...bitch Now this kats got ya tongue... ...Cause vets conclude...your drop aint shit worded horribly, rhyme was plain wit bitch and shit..not feelin it.. 2/10 You come with weak punches played rhymes, you at ya peak And do all of RB a favor... ...Please don't look before you leap little bit played... but decent... 5/10 You aint got nothin ta back ya shit up, jus anutha newb who acts hard Jus a wannabe MC from Maryland got as much respect as ya avatar (none) nice punch.. good personal... but ya coulda made it better by ya wording, but 8/10 PMin me like mad ... sayin I'm no vet and you'll KO me dude Not even the Oaks in ya sig will protect from my 'sonning' you decent closer.. 5/10 overall - 20/50 my vote - Oak..he came harder wit his punches and had more wordplay
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