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02-14-04, 05:07 PM
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lets not sleep please...i only drop an open mic
once in a long time...peace |
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02-14-04, 11:45 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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Good song,,,I really enjoyed this piece it had a lot of good detailed emotion with a good sence of power in your words...pretty concrete....i liked it...keep up the good work
I center my things now and then just to try and make my drops a little different...thats all
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02-15-04, 02:46 AM
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uppin this
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02-15-04, 02:53 AM
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Suspended Suspense
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a very nice piece to be sure, enjoyable read, I would critique it, but it didn't seem to really have any problems. Maybe the use of slang in such a serious topic, a few more multi's wouldn't have gone un-appreciated. But overall very good drop. 8/10.
If you could hit mine up, I would be gratefull. its in my sig. |
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02-15-04, 09:28 AM
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Straight Savage.
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Very Very dope here..I love the way you used your words sometimes......came off smooth and very nicely done. Beautiful flow, wonderful storytelling, and the Change was very dope...good shit
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02-15-04, 11:43 AM
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No Cure For MadNess...
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Pretty hot, Nice wordplay...Blah
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02-15-04, 10:09 PM
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^damn u are wack...but thanx
 ....uppin |
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02-15-04, 11:40 PM
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New to RB
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nice flow..i liked your word choice alot
you switched it up along with your flow good imagery i thought..nice concept you had here I liked how all ya love at tha begining.. turned to hatred...nice drop keep it up |
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02-16-04, 03:20 AM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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uppin
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02-17-04, 12:20 AM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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chae..uppin
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02-17-04, 02:55 PM
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Word.
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I agree this was a good piece.....I liked it, made a good read.....some things in this i could relate to.....sounds like something i would write lol, cause i write about this kind of stuff a lot....but yeah i liked it...had good flow to it i thought....the structure seemed good....had good imagary....overall a good piece here.
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