yea.. i just realized that.. sorry guys.. good thing i didnt poll, just stating my opinion.. sry guys.. dont dq him or anything, its my bad..

Sorry bout the freepost, but consider this an up, Que can you hit one of my battles up?

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Oakley -v- Empire

Oak:
ya punches were good, flow was consistent, structure was nice though out..not stretched lines, you had some really nice personals and a good veres overall

Quotables

Queludes word's are so wak they demand "instant replay"...
sellin "the good shit?" I'd rather buy used condoms off Ebay

This kid's injured in battle, sum one dislodge his throat..
Poor herb, Coming so broke...He's gotta beg Token to Vote


Que:
punches werent bad..flow was pretty good but not as consistent as Oak's.. you had some decent personals and overall just an average verse

Quotables

Ha!..I'm laughing at you.. someone must've darkened ya tints
The only way you shine's the outer glow applied in ya sig..

overall - oak took this battle wit harder punches and better personals..

V/ Oak

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Oakley -v- Empire

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Oakley -v- Empire

this one was pretty close, but i would have to say Oakley took this one with some harder punches, a nice flow, which was easy to read and it was well structured with alot of personals and a couple of alright metas, your opener and closer were nice...
Quelude:decent verse too, punches just didnt land as hard, same with the personals,
try to work on your openers and finishers...it makes quite an affect on the battle
vocab was decent...wouldnt hurt to throw in better vocab and wordplay...but nice verse all the same....nice job guys...
return the favor.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112928
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431

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Oakley -v- Empire

This was not a close battle.

Oakley came alot harder than the other kid. The other kid just didnt compare whatsoever, but I do see how he might have potential. Oakley, you came pretty decent, but you have room for improvement, of course. Your closer could have been stronger.

Vote- Oakley

please return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114170

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damn, oakley took this battle, he had some creative ass punches such as the line about the daewoo and also the ebay line....quelude your verse was good to but oakley just overtook you in this one......you guys both were pretty even on the personals and flow but the breakdown was definitely in the punches...oakley just took a different approach and used some good shit...this was a really good battle though, and it was worth my time to read it...

punchesakley
personals:tie
flowakley
wordplayakley

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damn, it's always making those fucking smiley faces when i use the letter O...ha, oh well..

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Oakley got it his vocab is off the hook. He links it mad nice. Some wack shit. He also had mad work doing his sigs. gotta give this kid props.

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yeah, oakley definetly won this, id give a long explanation, but i cant poll vote anyway

uppin for the last time.....



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I poll voted one of the many that didn't.

so Oakley wins.

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