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Old 04-05-04, 06:29 PM   #16
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i'm registered now so i'll poll vote
cud ya'll go vote too its in regular front lines
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Old 04-24-04, 08:16 AM   #17
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Here's how I saw it.....

Eki came OK in this one but had some played out punches. You started with the most played line in here. Maybe back when you wrote it, it wasn't that played but it is now...... you had a choppy flow in some spots which dfinately took away from your verse. Bretheren came with better punches and wordplay. His flow was a little choppy in spots too but the punches definately made up for it.......

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Old 05-01-04, 11:12 PM   #18
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chekc it

brethern gotthis shit with harder punchs and nice wordplay on this verse flow wasnt reallythere for me like force together lines only worked out cause the punchs hit harder then his and elki lines was played brah not hatin but get creative with some shit and get better wordplay added to your verse might help out your meek punchs to just elevate a lil bit
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Old 05-03-04, 10:39 PM   #19
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ok brethen got it eki ur structure was horrible mad plaed lines ok flow and no vocab work on all of those ok batle verse i guess eki urs was alot better better flow vocab and punches i would like 2 c u come with more multis and personals though really good verse so my vote obviously goes 2 bre eki that verse needs mad elevation
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