guyver-if ya got vocab use it correctly otherwise straight verse and oh yeah work on them personals...
Yo-YO-i was feelin' ya shit ya structure need some work, vocab was aight but ya punches were harder in my opinion...

With that said Yo-YO<-my vote

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aight it goes like this guyver you went first kid u shoulda went second so maybe u can think of better material you need a better approach when u flowin ya intentions should always be to kill na mean u need to step up to tha plate and stop talkin so much shyt yo yo u did good in my opinion but u can improve but who cant good job u got my vote 1

Hey yall niggas betta get to votin on this shit one or two votes only get it in already

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