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lk63 1 100.00%
S-killz 0 0%
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Old 03-13-04, 08:55 PM   #1
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I wasn't feel you guys at all you both are newbish in your flow and u need to uppin your skills and ik63 u wack and your structure sucks to u need to change that up also this ain't no chat room yo both were like on the same page wit each other even dough ik63 had more lines he still didn't win and nor did skillz i am giving this one to skills dough cuz i could understand his and is structure was better and his punches was lil bit better and you ppl need to learn how to vote.

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Old 03-13-04, 09:46 PM   #2
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iight... This is how it goes. S-killz ya lines were too short. and you dont need the dashes if there isnt a punch or word play. You had some punched but they were weak as hell. Besides that there was nothing. Work on your line length and try and fit in some multies and personals they give points to the verse.

lk.. Like always you have a nice verse. Some of the shit...was exactly that, but you had some nice punches and metas in there. I liked th eout of order thing. I think you should try and structure you shit more so its easier to read... instead of a paragraph make it spaced using Enter.

This was really a lopsided battle. lk took this in all categories that were availible in this battle. S-killz got eaten up... Just keep workin on what i mentioned and you'll get better S-killz.

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Old 03-13-04, 10:47 PM   #3
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well thanks for the explained vote godfather and liquior of tears. but those other votes were bullshit they shouldnt count.
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Old 03-16-04, 07:19 PM   #4
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comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far
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Old 03-18-04, 04:36 PM   #5
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comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far

L.I.Tears ur vote never went through, please try again
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Old 03-21-04, 04:31 PM   #6
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comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far
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