Sheesh. There's more content to vote on in the rest of this thread than in those battle verses. FYI and just to get it out of the way, "defence" is a legit British spelling of the word. Now you know.

Jixi started with a decent personal and went downhill from there, ending with a couple of "WTF?" lines. CJ didn't finish all that strong either, but seemed to have a little more aggressive battle stance throughout, and I guess that's enough to give him the vote. Even though I feel like I'm voting on only half a battle.

British....why dont you check the location....
the hoe spelled it wrong lol.

uppin

'upin...

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Sry for double post....was on the first page...
Carson...You know diddlyshit 'bout the bahamas. It only gained indipendance from the BRITISH commonwealth like 20 years ago...For the record it was "Correct" Grow up please... thanx.

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figured you would learn how to spell a word after 20 years.
it was worth a waisted up....

upin

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i say cj won! jus' because he sounds like he's been rappin alittle longer. jixi sounds like she jus' started. i do think jixi will get better.

^^^wow, Severely not explained.

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this newbie site is wak. uppin.

Jixi,first Off,u Started This Thread,which Automatically Means U Should Drop First,unless Otherwise Specified....but When U Have A Time Limit,it Means Both Yall Post At The Same Time,unless U Say He Drops First,which I Dont See U Mentioning Anywhere....u Should've Been Dq'd For That Shit,n Worse Yet,u Played It Off Like U Meant For Him To Drop In 15 But U Get An Extra 15 To Feed Off Him? Not Just A Liar,but A Spineless Coward
Just Like U Talked Shit Then Told Me To Drop First,then Fed Off My Verse,not To Mention U Had Ur Whole Crew "proof Read It" ...more Like Ur Whole Crew Wrote It Together...anyway,i'm Beginning To See How Desperate U Are To Win,yet U Have Yet To Win A Battle...aside Of All The Above...reading The 2 Verses...u Obviously Lost...u Wrote Half As Much In Twice As Much Time....and It Wasnt Even Half As Good...n Thats My Honest Opinion...this Aint No Hate Vote,cuz I Personally Think U Beat Will A Peer ...

Vote=carson

JiXi's Verse Was Short And Half Assed....It Didnt Really Compare To Carsons But His Wasnt Even That Good...But Did Go First And Had A More Solid Verse....Holla-Bakk.

Vote:CarsonJetX2

One.

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RB Battle Record:
Text Battles Audio Battles
Wins:<<4>> Wins:<<1>>
Loses:<<0>> Loses:<<0>>
KO's:<<1>> KO's:<<1>>

Murked:
~TheSinnister~
~Thugz Life~[/U]
~Furoshis~
~VenOm~
"I'm Not Tryna End Yah, Just Weaken-Yah-Game,
I Ain't Sayin' Ish To Yah, My Record Speaks-For-My-Name"

^^this is what I'm talkin about.....

you dont think its that good...because you think your good....
and your wak...so what you see good is wak, to make yourself feel good.

damn newbies......uppin

Yoh Dawg....The Only Reason I Said Its Not That Good Is Cuz It Looks More Liek A Poetry Assignment Yah Lil Sister Wrote Rather Than A Battle Verse.....Dawg, Wheres The Structure....? You Have Barely Ne Wordplay Or Multies...Its Just 10 Sentances With A Rhyming Word On The End....Elevate If You Wanna Get Respect Like You Think You Shud...1

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RB Battle Record:
Text Battles Audio Battles
Wins:<<4>> Wins:<<1>>
Loses:<<0>> Loses:<<0>>
KO's:<<1>> KO's:<<1>>

Murked:
~TheSinnister~
~Thugz Life~[/U]
~Furoshis~
~VenOm~
"I'm Not Tryna End Yah, Just Weaken-Yah-Game,
I Ain't Sayin' Ish To Yah, My Record Speaks-For-My-Name"

carson: you showed better aggression towards your opponent and structure was nice i like. i think there was only one punchline tht hit but that was enough to be victorious

jixi: need to take more time on ya rhymes add more lines it jus wasnt enough .... i see potential though

v/carson

please return the favor and vote in my battle at
daclassic vs L.I. thanx its in the front page of front lines