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UnbornRookie 5 55.56%
lyricalchick86 4 44.44%
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Old 03-17-04, 12:08 AM   #16
James West
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UnbornRookie won this in structure, and the these two bars were better than all lyrical chicks punches...

"man look at this trick / think she da shit /
bitch so wack she da only one in her clique/"

"you ain't no leader trick -- i'm da one to follow/
don't even try to spit -- just suck it up and swallow"

so thats a win in punches too.

lyricalchick's only good line was this one

"Nigga u wanna be in my clique u just not good enough
Yo rhyme was so fukin whack it was funny da police had to put dem in handcuff"

but it wasnt put together right so it didnt come off as good as it could of.

then some of the lines were horrible

"You whack dawg 99% of yo shit was garbage
You a gay ass nigga playin with barbie"

wtf was that.

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Old 03-17-04, 12:17 AM   #17
Willa
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one of u drop a vote on my battles
vs psyc
vs razer
and ill drop an honest vote on this
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Old 03-17-04, 04:20 PM   #18
lyricalchick86
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From: hopewell,va
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ok um can we gett some more vote will a peer ill vote honestly on yo battle
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Old 03-18-04, 06:00 AM   #19
Razer
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Both pretty weak to be honest but i think unborn rookie deserves it. He just had slightly better punchlines than lyrical chick. But he only won it by a little bit in my opinion.
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Old 03-18-04, 06:25 AM   #20
Da Vinci
THE COUNCIL
 
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My votes goes to lyrical. Both flows were about the same, but lyrical had more creative punches that hit harder. It seems that there was a little more thought put into her lines, and it showed. Unborn rookie, it seems had a fairly simple rhyming scheme like hit, trick, shit etc... Need more complexity.
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Old 03-18-04, 08:40 AM   #21
Issachar
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I kept putting off voting on this battle because there's so little there to vote on. Neither verse was impressive. On the whole, I think Unborn took this one by using a stronger rhyme scheme (in some places it's not quite as simplistic as it looks) and having a clearer sense of direction, whereas LC's stuff came off like a quick rant, parts of which didn't even make sense like the "handcuffs" line. Still, this is a small step up from the last verse of hers that I voted on. Keep workin' and gettin' stronger at this thing, y'all.
 
Old 03-18-04, 03:24 PM   #22
Krackmittens
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wow lyrical sweetheart you should have come harder on this cat you could have done alot better i like the lick my clit line unborn you had some decent stuff but nothing that stuck out you guys are trying to make a name for yourself on here come hard as fuck you know be creative dont use the same played out lines
unborn-2/10
lyricalchick-3/10

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