close battle I thought, but I didnt like how SUPERS' just kept goin and goin and was hard to read and some of it didnt ryme. Kingz flowed better and punches were even bot I got to give this to kingz for better structure and flow. Work on the flow super.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118148 hit this battle up plz.. I have had 5 votes they kept gettin DQ'd so holla at it ..and vote good.. peace

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5orry but thyz battle waz kinna weak... it'z juz a written battle yall, keep your barz kon5tint in5ted of theze - brakez... gue55 what im trinna 5ay iz 5UPERVILLAIN'z ver5e top Kingz. King dawg, lil advi¢e... keep your 5hyt 5hort but 5weet My Vote=5uper

First off, this was a pretty good battle, probably the best i've seen so far. Here's the break down:

Creativity: Both of you kats were pretty creative. So its pretty equal in this category. Neither one of you used old ish, or ish from other people and rearranged it, so this was good and fresh.

Flow: Both had a nice flow. I was able to flow both rhymes pretty easily which is always good in a battle. So this category was pretty equal as well

Vocab: Each vocab was pretty good. Both of you had some nice lines. I liked this like by SV "i'll raid the place you sleep with 50 angry, raging fiends,
take ya things, rape your queen,
i came with razor b.'s, lazer beams and navy-made machines", this line was off the freakin futon. Kingz had some nice lines as well, like this one "I’ve got a killer’s mentality – it will be a fatality
I will backslap u so hard – you will be ‘back to reality’
I better watch my ass – cos u aint sure bout ya sexualty", this line was butter. But for this category, Kingz had more dope punches, SV began to sway a little towards the end.

Structure: In this spot Kingz structure was much easier to read. His lines didnt wrap that much so it was easier on the eyes. SV lines did wrap in some places, it was a little more difficult to read but it wasnt nonsense stuff, it was to keep the flow going so this really wasnt a big problem.

Overall vote: Kingz, mainly because he had maybe 1 - 2 more punches. If it wasnt for this, I would have voted the battle EQUAL. Both of ya'll did DA DAMN THANG!!!

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WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT ABOUT??? this is bullshit honestly. i already won this battle when it was first posted.......and by a landslide at that! so now the mods come and fuck with it even though it was closed and buried for weeks? shit sounds fuckin' fishy to me. also, some of the cats that voted for me in this battle wound up joining my crew later, so im not gonna ask them to correct the technicalities of their votes, faggots will think im cheating..........im not a fuckin' cheater, im a man about mine. kingz, you got down cutty, but my verse was hotter/more creative. if they give it to you, they give it to you, but you know this shit was through. it was curtains. p.m. me playboy..........we gotta talk.

plus, whoever pulled this gay shit to try to fuck up my record/standings, i send you this message............"I FEEL YOUR WEAKNESS. HATER!"

S.V. THE MUTHAFUCKIN' TYRANT!!!!! CRHYME SINDICATE!!!!!

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hott as battle baby both had good structure good shit ya ming check it
kingz-punches-8/10
structure-9/10
vocab-9/10
flow-9/10
overall-9/10

SUPERVILLAIN
punches-8/10
structure-9/10
vocab-9/10
flow-8/10
overall-8.5/10
wasnt feelin da flow like eirthing else
so vote 2 kingz

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