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View Poll Results: Who is NOT to be merk'd?
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Limited Edition 5 100.00%
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Old 03-29-04, 08:02 AM   #1
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[PROOF]
Open: 5/10 Ok... nothin special
Close: 4/10 Weak...
Personals: 5/10 Weak...
Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 You had sum goin on... not bad.
Punches: 5/10 Dint have enough... goes hand in hand with personals...
Multis: 5/10 Both had same amount...
Lines That Stuck Out:
"if we lived closer, id make you feel my full effect
but im only 14, and im not walkin to quebec"

Overall: wasnt really feelin this verse... u got potential tho... 29/60 Ouch...

[LIMITED EDITION]
Open: 6/10 Nice... Felt it.
Close: 4/10 On the weak side...
Personals: 6/10 High School Shootin line was nice...
Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 not bad, not nice
Punches: 6/10 Felt it...
Multis: 5/10 Didnt have alot...
Lines That Stuck Out:
"Fuck you for hatin', I'd merk your ass from Edmonton to Montreal"
"Only thing you got close to street is a high school shootin'"

Overall: Felt ya verse KiKo... jus work on ya closers... 33/60

My Vote - Limited Edition
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Old 03-30-04, 01:18 AM   #2
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Breakdown:
Punches: L.E.
Metas: L.E.
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: L.E.
Flow: Tie
Disses: Tie

Limited Takes This One.He Came With Better Punches And More Complexity.Proof Had An 'OK' Verse But Not Strong Enough & Didnt Show Any Complexity.Proof's Strong Point Was His Disses.

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Old 03-28-04, 02:47 PM   #3
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A'ight...thsi is beein' slept on hard...leave a link, and I will hit your's up...

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Old 03-28-04, 02:57 PM   #4
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vote le
opener le
punches le
flow tie
vocab tie
personals tie
closer by a mile le
le came 10 times harde

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Old 03-29-04, 05:26 PM   #5
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I like proofs better. he's got more rhyme and flow...edition, i like yours too, but spit some elevated shit....work on vocab, flow, and punches....
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Old 03-29-04, 05:28 PM   #6
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need some votes on dope_emcee vs. enygma....

www.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117379
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Old 03-29-04, 05:34 PM   #7
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my bad....that's not the right link....just look for dope_emcee vs. enygma in frontlines....
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Old 03-29-04, 05:36 PM   #8
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limited edition looks like u did reaserch and used it agienst. u tore proof up howevr he was shootin awfull good
 
Old 03-29-04, 11:19 PM   #9
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A'ight, lets get some people who can poll vote. dope_emcee...already voted on that battle...........

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Old 03-29-04, 11:49 PM   #10
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yo limited came with better punches vocab and an all-around better flow
you had a lot more personals an it was pretty tight

proof you had some nice shit but i thought it was too normal i think you need some better punchlines and vocab

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117604
 
Old 03-30-04, 12:36 AM   #11
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O.K. not swayin here trust me, but some shit people here need to get through their heads.

1. Yes, i know you people dont always read battles where one of the opponents is from colorado, but i get the columbine shit all the time. Cant think of 2 opponents that havent used that against me. I can see how something like that is original to some people, but because i hear it all the time, it seems like a played out line.
2.Vital, you put my worst line in lines that stuck out, i had better lines than that, maybe you missed them.
3. If i lost i lost, dont say i had a good verse, cause i know that me and Limited aint veteran emcee's yet, and if i had a really good verse then you say he beat me by alot, just do the math, i know neither of us are that good.
4. Dont vote on me just to get me to poll vote on your battle, ill vote if you leave me some info on how to elevate (dope-emcee)

just gettin some shit off my chest, im out, peace.
 
Old 03-30-04, 12:42 AM   #12
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straight up limited editions flows where way more advanced ! he hit personally attacking proofs sty;e and personality ! plus i'm tierd of fake ass emcee's and these wack ass dick rydeing internet crews following eachother around voteing for one anoter! with out you crew dawg i'm sure you would never get a vote on this one 1 but i could be wrong 1 you all know who my vote goe to ........... let the polls show peace
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Old 03-30-04, 02:59 AM   #13
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^ im proof, this is my alias, if my strong point as my disses, you would think i would have won, right?
 
Old 03-30-04, 06:14 AM   #14
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yo when i read proof's battle i was like damn. it was good for 10 lines. but the gay jokes are played. i expected proo fto win untill i read limited verse. it was hot

'You from Denver aka South Park, you ain' gangsta stupid
Only thing you got close to street is a high school shootin'

nise line dog

vote: limited edition

hit these battles pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117485
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127
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Old 03-31-04, 10:33 AM   #15
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Proof... i didnt miss anything in your verse...

jus rating it how i saw it.

No hate...

its all love...

PM me if u got any questions on anythin...
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