alright everybody we are now UPPIN 4 FuKKIN VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

alright everybody we are now UPPIN 4 FuKKIN VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It took some time to decide but i'll have to give it to Maku because he had interesting punclines.

damn...overall id se dj got this but he sorta bit a line from dmx - where the hood at "Shove ya head up ya ass, have you seein shit clearly".............but dj took this wit better punches, flow, multi's,structure, and vocab....maku u need to not stretch yo lines...it fucks up flow....i didnt feel ya punches....v/dj
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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

This was quite good. Everybody came solid and had some interesting lines, so here's the breakdown...

Maku: Blazin punchlines period. Through every bar you had somethin very clever to say and your setup made it perfect. Not alot of multis, but the ones you did have made ya verse flow well.

Em Sce: You had better multis and vocab but thats about it. And in a battle, especially text, doesn't mean shit...

Winner: Maku

uppin this bitch.............................................

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uppin this bitch

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Maku JaiiLiin-ya shit was tight, but very weak, too much boasting
too little punches, this is the only line that stood out

"Nod ya head d.j em sce, cuz my speach is the truth//
Till ya neck gets stretched like slaves in a sequel to roots"
i liked that, but all over a very weak verse, nice flow but its the punches that aint there4/10

d.j- ya rap was nice, but besides for adding his name to ya shit
their wernt any great personals, you killed him with meti's, wordplay
and punches, i thought wit a name like his you would of hammered more on it
i thought you did very wellll. 7/10

"C you mite say Im an Ill blacksmith the way I com wit sic bars
When dis verbal massacre occurs Maku JaiiLiin is left wit thick scars"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nameplay^^^^^weak

vote D.j em sce

uppin for votes..........ive upped this to much...maku you need to up this now

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ok ok listen

Dj em sce: Maku Jaiiliin:
Flow 6/10 Flow 6/10
Wordplay 6/10 Wordplay 5/10
Punches 7/10 Punches 5/10
Creativity 8/10 Creativity 9/10


Do the Fuckin MAth
Stay in school

uppin 4 votes...........................................

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good battle..
the break down
flow-DJ EMSCE-8
MAKU JALIN-8
VOCAB- DJ EMSCE-7
MAKU JAILIN-8
STRUCTURE-DJ EMSCE-7
MAKU JALIN- 6/ DIFFERENT FONTS
PUNCHLINES-DJ EMSCE-8
MAKU JAILIN- 7
VOTE GOES TO DJ EMSCE
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uppin for votes.....finally just one more.........

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uppin again............................................. ......last time im goin to do this

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