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Triple_n |
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5 | 100.00% |
MADD HAtter81 |
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0 | 0% |
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Out-Spoken
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IP:
He's a little pussy, he's scared of his own reflection/
He goes to the doctor everytime he gets an erection/ hahahah that line by itself murked him...good drop..my vote goes to you
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
yo votes needed, explain your vote, these d'qued votes is killin' me
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP:
I gotta give this one to triple N......... His verse came a lot harder than madd hatter's, had a lot better wordplay, vocab, flow, and personals. Madd hatter's shit was just basic and childish and he just got torn apart.
Vote:triple N Hit up a link..... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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okay back away imma let the cat out the bag
the rumors are true triple_n is a fag Gay jokes are played, not a good opener at first i thoght you serious and your rhyms are hot but you gotta dislocate are chins just to make are jaws drop Good concept, bad wording yea you beat suppream that's all that you'll get he was just a practies run but im the real test You shouldn't talk about the people he beats you had one good line thay's all you got put your brain on the railroad to regain your train of thoght You just said all he's got are good lines? go ahead use what i say twist em' if you like cuz im ali your just bow wow trina fight Not a punch at all im a man of lil words a man of many faces shove my boot so far up ya ass you'll be pissin out my laces Still kinda basic but getting better so if you forget my name it's the maddhatter but you'll be able to read it off the wall cuz your brain will splatter Shoulda closed wit the last line, this one ain't good Your style was very basic and childish. You need to use some better vocab, wordplay, metas, flow, and structure. It looks like you just put this together in 20 secs. Take your time and read what you write. This kid's only 13, battlin' a man thats deadlier than nado/ I'm a crush this bitch, an turn him into mashed patotoes/ Weak opener Youngster's full of so much shit that I just have to laugh/ Cuz shit comes out when ya mommy runs ya bath/ Much better You little bastard, you define the meaning of da word jerk/ He had to sign off early, cuz he forgot to do his homework/ Killin him wit personals He got da nerve to challenge me, he end up da next dead/ Little boy called me fag and he hasn't even taken sex ed/ You shouldn't have fed from his verse but not bad He's a little pussy, he's scared of his own reflection/ He goes to the doctor everytime he gets an erection/ Another good personal Kids nowadays challenge vets, I'm a rip mad hatter/ I bet he hasn't even learned how to controll his bladder/ Ehhh.....Its startin to get a bit old This kid's punches miss more then da batters of the dodgers/ He's jus a punkass whiteboy, that couldn't beat up Mr. Rogers/ Not a bad closer Triple N came wit a lot harder punches, better flow and structure, personals hit hard, need I say more? Keep up the good work! Vote:Triple N
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP:
Now can you put my vote back???
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look at this
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triple n aint got much to say but DAMN opened up clownin an kept the punchz comin the whole verse open to close and personalz were hittin hard and the structure wawz nice 2
other kid elevate work on changin your style gay jokez aint workin and punchz have to hit harder and use more personalz those alwayz get votez keep workin vote/ triple n |
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
come on y'all votes needed fully explained^^^^^^^^^^^
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
come on y'all one more vote for ko, I will return favor just leave ya link, holla back
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Miss Me?
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ok breakdown...
opener - triple flow - triple punches - triple structure - triple personals - triple closer - triple vote - triple ok madddont start battles with people u cant even contend with...werk on usin multis n personals...u need direct punches...pretty much werk on everything triple...his level isnt close to urs...u coulda came half that hard n still merked him....easy win...nice punches and flow... return the favor in my topical with nope http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118637
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