Att, your structure is so bad, people are not getting your rhyme, i understood all of your verse, but thats only because i knew how to read, keep your rhymes on the same line, and if you gotta stretch it let the 'idiot' know, go out of your way to make it look simple and easy to follow

Your structure now is

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/ - means your rhyme, this is just an example, but you should be able to see what i mean, people arnt going to see where your rhyme is. It needs to be like...

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And if you HAVE to stretch the bar, LET OTHERS KNOW

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^ I wouldn't suggest stretching a bar long then half its length - or it will mess your flow.

Anyway i think K' won this, after reading and getting both, id say att's downfall is (apart from his structure) that its a battle and you need hard punchs and nice little flow, make it funny, i didnt see much, no fresh concepts either... just think of jokes and add em in.... So, i vote KUNIVA

dont know how Atticus got one vote, he is horible man, I didnt even use one punch line when I battled him and I know it sucked but better then what he can do.. you need to work on flow bud and get some rytmes. good job kuniva you get my vote.. dont really need to say anymore

Yo ,ya niggaz is arguing like bitchs.Cut it out kids.Anyway my vote goes to Atticus because Kuniva was stumbling like a motherfcker. respect goes 2 both 4 trying.
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^wtf, i was stumbling like a motherfucker???

I vote Kuniva ..ya both lacked in some of the rhymes....Kuniva was slightly better and i think attica was good overall kuniva wins (but hardly) i

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people, please read the battles, i mean, yall sound like retards sayin barely, and we know u didnt read it aka

FOOLS WUT THA FUCK IS WRONG WIT YA'LL
Kuniva wudda won jus off his rhymes
atticus tha structure dawg..i read yours three tymes and still didn't find them rymes
Kuniva..ur structurew wuzn't that good either but it rhymed and looked betta than ATTICUS
Come fresha both of ya'll..and some stuff that goes HA HA THAT WUZ NICE
u kno keep it interestin
not close VOTE-KUNIVA

y'all ppl and them hate votes, if ya good ya good if ya not ya not... my nigga Kuniva dogged walked this nigga he gon' win and i'm not votin'... Nice try Atticus not hate from this chick... Real f/emcees fa ever reppin' tha crew--

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