hittin this up for votes on the account that I want to get this over and done with, wether the result is something i want or not... please vote and leave a valid reason... no hate votes or all that shit...

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my vote got kicked out.. so ill try again

albi-i thought ya verse was weak, you could drop that rap on anyone +
ya flow was ok, could be alot better, i didnt c alot of good punches
there was like one,
"Believe me, I have all due respect, but this bitch is like a dick that cant erect"
that was nice would enjoy to c more of those, all and all i give you 3/10

miss- i thought ya rap was short and to the point, nice flow, a couple of solid punches

"say she can drop her verses deadly/
pullin' her notebook out sayin' wait til i'm ready"

ya ending was not as good, i acctually expected alot more
all over it was a tight battle but you got my vote, for straight punches
and good text structure, hope to see you improve on ur meti's to punches
6/10

vote Missfiyagurl

Ok, this is the last time I can UP for votes... so erm, can y'all hit this up to get a quick result, I would apriciate it... see, I even asked nicely without climbing up y'alls asses and whiping them clean with my tongue...

Albi
Ya structure was a bit stretched and dragged punches on till they barely scratched the surface. I liked the consistency in the rhyme but it was made harder to read. If ya dim down ya line lengh a bit and just go for straight punches u'll do better. u don't have to explain ya punches, would you explain to a nigga why you punched him in the face? lol. I got a lot to work with especially for ya first try.


Miss
I preferred the structure and flow. had a better punch.
say she can drop her verses deadly/
pullin' her notebook out sayin' wait til i'm ready/
Thats the best punch i seen in the whole thing. She kept her line lengths to a minimum, i like that. Makes it easier to evaluate. I was feelin ya consistant rhymin steady flow too. Ran at a steady pace too.

I'd say Miss takes it, it was pretty even, but miss had a better punch and structure.

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iight thyz iz goin ta mi55y, 5he kept her flow an 5trukture kon5tint an it waz 5weet an 5imple... albi gurl i ain't haten on u er nuthin, but ya gotta work on ya flow, allya linez were dragged out, an mabey it would get the point akkro5 without da - an //...thaz juz annoyin, ya got 5ome good 5hyt if ya kan ¢enter out. but ya w/e my Vote mi55y

ok both could work on structure especially the first 1 missy u need to work on vocab really bad the other guy does 2 and both could work on multis
vote goes to albi he simply came harder better punches and better vocab u both need to really elevate though

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okay good shit...i think fiya girl u came real week mah it aint even look like u was tryin...and al ya shit was hott i dont know if u a dude or a girl lol but i felt ya shit more u aint have dat many punches but u had enuff da win dis battle

my vote-al

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