aight aight still uppin

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nice battle
in my opinion accomplishment had a nice flow and sick punches 8/10 .
cife had fresh pesonals 8/10
hard choice though...

vote:accomplishment

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its hard to git in punches bout acc's name
and tha mcdonald's has been used b4 so its played a lil

tha genital punch wuz nuttin

accomp flo wuzn't as good but it wuz over clouded by his personals and punches

VOTE- ACCOMPLISHMENT, but not by a lot

i like this shit rite here goin at each otherz throatz hard to pick a choice both hard tite punchz like other 1 said some were used before and get old from hearin so not az strong cife had more personalz but used up punchz and acc had better punchz but az many personalz and it waz kinda off to have an hour to post

no bad blood though tite battle
vote/accomplishment

hit mine up

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I don't know if my vote counts for anything, but here is what i think...

Cifes punches were a little bit below accomplishments...but cifes flow was a lot better...could be just the way that i read..but thatds how i feel..i also feel that vcifes imagery was better...so i'ma give to cife...good battle though...Much love and respect

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

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Still upppin kiddies need one vote to close this shit maine

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Punches: Cife
Metas: Cife
Wordplay: Cife
Nameplay: Tie
Personals: Tie
Creativeness: Cife
Enjoyable: Cife
Opener: Cife
Finisher: Cife
OveraLL Verse: Cife


Comments:
Pretty much one sided.. it wasn't all that close.. and it was pretty weak... accomp.. you need to up your punches N' add some more complex shit with creative meta's.. all your shit seemed like nonsense to me... and to cife.. that fancy text n shit stuff i ain't feelin'.. i admit i italics my verses.. but don't try to explain ya wordplay n punches N' try to make them stand out. REAL MC's will be able to figure out what your gettin' at... to both.. elevation is quite essential to you both... cife.. i see some good talent.. and accomp... keep droppin' N' practicin'... you got some potential as well.. but this battle as i said was just one-sided...



Vote: Cife...


SoLo Whun...

yeah ok still upppin for votes

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accomplished you had better punches. comgrats. nice battle!

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

I give this one to acc.

Cife's diss on acc's name was weak and really fucked up the flow and the rhyme of the whole thing.. it was ok up until that but at the end all the rhymes are really forced and shit

Acc's stuff was more original at least, the flow was a bit messed up and the third part was just weak. I give it to him for the second bit ("undepicted..").

Vote back on mine:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118472

fuck you gotta suck a mods dick to getta vote man everthing dont count i got this bitch beat like 10-1 hah astill uppin

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Cife: good verse, you had some good wordplay but nothing really stuck out. That genitals line wasn't bad but the senital line could have been worded better. One thing I noticed was that you never really came wit any personals. The one personal that you did come with was kinda played. I used it against him in my first battle. I liked the closer though, that shit was pretty tight.

Accomplishment: Another good verse. I liked how you brought all ya boys names in there, that was kinda tight. Wordplay was good and flow was on point!

Overall there were two good verses here but with any battle only one can truely be the winner. This time I had to go with.............
.......Accomplishment

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one vote das all crack addicts

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Need One Vote People And Oh Yeah Kuniva Is A Pussy Bitch

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