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DisasterPeice420 5 100.00%
Young Siz 0 0%
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Old 04-10-04, 12:03 PM   #1
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lmfao goold lawd disasta is sick....im feelin dis im bout to break this down

first disasterpeice:

your nices line was:
You're Ridiculous Dog Fucker, You Belong On 'Jerry-Springer',/

that shit had me crackin up for a while...

you have sick structure and everything seemed too flow im feelin dis right here...

had alot of intelligent lyrics...you can tell you smart..i could understand what you were saying but i wouldnt put any of that in my lyrics....your punches were sickness i was shocked..but hey

young siz:
nigga ill put the fear in ya heart like grese hitting ya face when you cooking bacon//

no offense dawg..but wat the hell is that.......lmfao it will all come in good tyme..it myte iof went nice if u worded it differently

i got ice on neck so when i get hot i can stay in cool//

can someone tell me WHAT THE FUCK HE JUS SED..cuz i dunno lmfao....


overall young siz no hate dawg u did ur best i give u props for that jus do u and keep practicin

and disasterpeice i think u goin for easy wins haahah lmfao but ya u took this

opener:disasterpeice
closer:disaster
punches:disaster
meta:disaster

overall:disaster
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Old 04-10-04, 12:09 PM   #2
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Lol' ... Going For Easy Wins.. He Called Me Out' So I Started Up A Thread' .. But Yeah Uppppppppppin This Shit!!!!!!!!!!

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Old 04-10-04, 12:21 PM   #3
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Aight

Disaster-Great use of multies and punches, adding humor along with great skill.....dope verse overall, flowed well with excellent structure from the intro to the finish.

Siz-Mediocre battle verse, spotted some forced words in there I think, I'll look over it......yeah I did...and the punches were very basic.

Punches-Disaster took this with a great deal, adding humor, props to dis for that, Disaster takes this catergory.
Multies-I didn't really spot any multies in Siz's verse, if there were any, it must've been insubstantial, anways Disaster had some multies that really stood out, Disaster takes this catergory.
Metaphors-Disaster takes this catergory hands down, just read her verse and you'll know.
Vocabulary-Again, Disaster strikes.....she had a nice amount of mediocre vocabulary words, Disaster takes this.
Flow/Structure-Sorry Siz, but again Dis took this by a mile, her flow was on point and her structure was right there.
Humor-Disaster of course, some of her lines had me cracking up!!

Disaster blew Siz away with a knockout, I'd be surprised if I got disagreed with, but Disaster took this by a landslide, keep elevating though Siz.

Vote-Disaster for her humorous punches and nice use of vocabulary.
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