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Old 04-09-04, 04:04 PM   #1
Rollin_Deep
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aight L.I You should do this shit more often....
Ill give ya mad props for all the effort put in that..you got wild imagination...
L.I Gets this for the effort and thought in this....Nope Urs wasnt exactly wack either...

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Old 04-09-04, 03:43 PM   #2
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ok.. this one wasn't even close.. LI told a fucking story with his lines, great flow on it and good storytelling the whole way through. nope, it's a good start on a topical battle, but you didn't really stick to the topic and you basically just repeated the "im drunk" for most of your bars.. kinda old. didn't really tell a story or do much with the topic.

vote defintetely to LI.

honest votes on my battles...
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Old 04-09-04, 03:51 PM   #3
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Nope you didn't really stay wit the topic, your ryhmes were basic and lagging in some parts. Your vocab was basic throughout the whole verse, however it was a decent verse so I give you....
6/10

L.I. it was a nice verse, jus do me a favor next time don't write so damn much man. You stayed on topic had nice flow an ryhme scheme and you had a fairly broad vocab throughout...good verse
8/10
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