OK BAR BY BAR BREAKDOWN.....

You should do like a ghost and dissapear ..when it comes to me im ya main primal fear...
i see you stratin to shake when i come near...Battlin me is a bad choice i kould be the end of ya career..
Played out punch on ghost...ok vocab...
when i spit i might as well put my words on top of your head... cause theyre too complicated for you ..what i write with this lead..
my words will put a niggas career in trauma ... wit my wordplay im more fierce and despised than that nigga osama...
career in trauma...u basically stated that in your opener...nice punch tho...
dont strat cryin afterwards cuz i dont want no drama... i got enuff of it after your daddy found out i was sleepin wit yo mama...
nice multi's...ok punch
ghost you made the wrong choice battlin me.. im postin up in this bitch for everyone to see...
that how sick i can really be... by the end of my flow ill be wanted by every crew and that i can gaurantee...
no punch in here..ok multi's
But now im unleashin the wordplay of a genius in a 15 yr olds brain... tryin to keep wit my words is drivin you insane...
what you lack i pick up in and get stronger.. ya verse is too plain..
stretched line...boring punch...blah blah...
You aint even posted yet but im callin it a victory... kuz ya styles more sloppier than a college dormitory...
nice closer...sorta played tho

listen it aint a nigga in the game that can see me/
nope u cant beat me better get 3 more wishez from a jeanie/
rush niggaz like dwight freeny leave u ass naked wearin a beanie/
gay punch...ok flow
u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/
but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/
nice set up line but ur punch was wack
so keep plotin on a victory an ill smash that pronto/
1 win got u thankin u a warrior like tonto/
sigh...
got 2 gunz to give u shotz like a pair of free throwz/
wash the blood off my shirt and it turn to indigo/
fallin asleep now....
flippin on niggaz like jack nicholson in the shinin/
come on now that shit u spitin u call that rhymin?/
nice punch...
like glass u just see threw so i must be diamond/
dont call me playstation just cause im in the game/
blah didnt rhyme...
yo old rapz need restoration im heatin em wit the flame/
wit no hesitation them pistolz iz tearin u out the frame
Zzzzz...

Ok vote - Nope
ghost fix ya structure...werk on everything cuz u verse is a chore to read....nope werk on usin better personals...ok im out

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

This was obviously another newb battle.........

Nope: You obviously came to battle wit punches in every line. They were just too basic. No real thought behind them. Anyone can just rhyme words, it's the meaning behind them that really counts. You need to work on sneakin a few personals in there so people know who you are battlin.

Ghost: You seemed to beef yourself up more than put Nope down. That shit doesn't work in here. No one wants to hear how good you are, we wanna hear how bad your opponent is. You also need to work a few personals into your verse.

Overall this was an evenly matched newb battle. Both need to gain experience and get some good advice on how to elevate. Best attempt at a punch was........

u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/
but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/
^Not really worded right, but still was the best in the battle....

Vote: Ghost...... For ^ that......

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open: nope
close: nope
personals: nope
metas: nope
punches: nope
multis: nope

win:nope

this is really a 1 sided battle everyone can see that so theres no real reason for me to explain every lil detail is there nope wins this blah blah enjyo ya win playa

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aight good lookin on the votes keep em comin drop links ill return tha favor

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a newb battle LMAO i waznt even tryin to spit and killah bow need that shit canceled

UPPIN

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Aight uppin on this vote drop a link ill return da favor
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Aight uppin on this vote drop a link ill return da favor

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^^ how iz that last vote not cancelled already bullshit vote but fuck it uppin

Come on votes need this closed i got all the battles im allowed to have opened and i need these closed to start a battle............ drop links ill return the favor!
Dawg stop bitchin at everyfuckin thing damn after this is closed we can go again if you wnt .. just to prove that im better than you nigga ..... your call tell me if you want it.......

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Nice Battle>

Nope, you had lots of punches, but try to make them a little bit better if you have a wide selection of them. You had some personals but they were a little weak. I loiked your flow a lot better and creativity.
Ghost, You started off weak and your aim seemed like that you were talking about yourself, not about Nope. You had a couple of good punches and your vocab. was equal.

This was a tough descion, good battle. Nope has my vote because he came right at you and had a better flow. Both need to use more personals.

Vote: Nope.


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nigga il murda u nope i waznt even tryin to spit u bitch ass nigga battle still open cause u dont draw no attention cause u softer then a babiez ass nigga

so you agree to to a rematch and you better come as hard as you can so you cant say man i wsnt even tryin ...... if your down im down to make it good we can play for sdignatures if you want nigga holla back man o yeah and uppin people vote ont his shit so this kid stop beina bitch

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sdignatures? fuck iz yo ass talkin bout rite chea an im not a kid ya lil ho ass nigga get ya mind rite bitch

o yeah and uppin people vote ont his shit so this kid stop beina bitch...... tell me if your down or not want the rematch??????

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