ok heres the whole thing....

My rhymes are Drastic, I'll take you to school, come get your Ass Kicked//
I made the grade, she barely Passed It, I'm Ill enough to make her Class Sic//
Okay nice multi's in it...u had a nice personal...and it was a decent punch 7/10
I Shatter And Bruse, called out Disaster cause I was sick of Battlin Newbs//
I Had Her Confused, she must have thought I was just sick of Battlin Dudes//
Okay another bar with nice multi's...punch was aihgt, it didnt hit too hard 6/10
I Burn Em Out, she's from ATL where they produce shit like Word Of Mouf//
So Would You Please take some Summer's Eve and clean out that Dirty South//
Nice punch, personal, and multi's 9/10
I Maul And Stompin Her, she'll need the police, go Call An Officer//
Aw fuck...... Someone beat me to it, I came to beat the Balls Off Of Her//
Ehh i didnt feel the punch, "balls off her"? i dont get it but u had nice multis again 4/10
Avi says Still Matic, but ya Skills Battered, Rappin? you should Stop Or Pause//
Looks good on the pic, but said herself, In person she recieves Lots Of NAs//
Nice personal, multis, and a hard hitting punch 10/10
I'm Sayin, why's this bitch Beggin, she wants to Spit After Me//
Beat the booty off this bitch? dawg.......I just Disassed Her..... Peace//
An ok closer not to hard hitting...decent 7/10

OVERALL YOU GOT A....
43/60

Trying To Battle With That Weak A$$ Raps You "Bring-Through",/
The Only Ice In Your Life Is Cracking "Beneathe-You",/
Nice punch, some ok multis, pretty decent opener.... 6/10
Nobody Believes You, Cause You Admit I Got 'Game',/
Save Your Live, Back Off The Mic An Just Hang Your Head in 'Shame',/
Nice multis in there, hard hitting punch...was def feeling this bar 9/10No One To Blame Except Your Self For 'This-Shit',/
Picked A Fight With Tom Green And Got 'That-A$$-Whipped',/ (lol)
I'm The Verbal Alpha-Rappa Dominating This Bitch,/
Nice punch with the tom green line i def liked that, ok multis in it...didnt help ya flow with the 3 lines that rhymed...fucked up there 6/10
Pt The Rock Down For A Minute And See,/
My Flows Burn You Worse Than Your 'Venerial-Disease',/
This line was an ok punch, no multis....5/10
You Damn Right I'm Sick, But You Just 'Got-Fucked',/
My Disease Is In My Head, And Your's In 'Your-Butt',/
Not really a hard hitting punch...ur verse is starting to fall off 4/10
I Know Your Pumped Up Now, Your 'GayBoyFriend-Left',/
The Only 187 You Talking Bout Fucking His 'A$$-To-Death'/
lol nice punch this helped your sustainment...10/10
You Can't Defeat This, Better Call A 'Mountie-You-Bitch',/
This Real Americana Mofioso Pimp 'Slappin-You-Trick',/ (LoL)
Nice hard hitting punch...8/10\
Damn It Seem Like You "Burnt-YourSelf-Again",/
I Got More Green In My Name, Than Your "Life-Ever-Did",/
Ok closer...u needed a hotter one to take the battle....5/10

OVERALL YOU VERSE TALLEYS UP AS...
53/80

My vote goes to enygma for a harder verse....disaster u didnt come as hard as u usually do n thats why you didnt get the win....nice battle tho...
no hate just a vote, nice spits yall

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DisasterPeice420:
i was feeling ur lines more
structure and flow was strong
vocab and personals were really good
punchlines i thought they were really strong thats which got u the win
9/10

L.I.:
structure and flow was pretty good
vocab and personals were ok not that strong
punchlines wern't that great
8/10

My Vote: DisasterPeice420

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Punches: Even

Enygma killed it wit the Lotta Nas shit, but she came back wit the 187 shit, both of y'all had some sick fuckin' punches

Personals: Enygma Basically said about the dirty south the Nas shit, dpiece didn't really come wit any

Vocab: D peice

Flow: Even

Gotta give this one to Enygma, but both of y'all did real good. One of the best battles i seen on this shit.

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Disaster-I don't know, but I think you might've took it soft this battle compared to your battle against Siz, but this, I dunno, maybe Eny was too proficient observed to you. I dunno.

Enygma-Like always, he came with the sufficient and consistent multies, combining with meritorious punches, which really took down Disaster's liability of victory.

Punches-Both, Enygma came with hard-hitting punches, and not to mention humourous, while Disaster came with intellectual and conscious punches. Both takes this catergory.
Multies-Enygma, came with BOUNTIFUL multies, so did Dis, but I spotted more and BETTER multies intiated by Enygma.
Vocabulary-Enygma's punches were good, but the words weren't as phrenic as Disaster great use of words and intelligent punches combined, Disaster takes this catergory for her nice use of words.
Metaphors-Both, both emcees had metaphors spotted in their verses, almost about the same amount, so both take this catergory.
Flow/Structure-Again, this catergory was evened out, as both emcees gave their best, with a whole lot of structure and flow in both verses, both emcees get this catergory.
Humor/Creativity-Both had humor and creativity, but Enygma edges this catergory out by a cm., he had nice lines with abundance humor and creativity, keeping me reading.

Vote-This battle was actually very evened out by BOTH emcees, both gave alot of nice verses, but ENYGMA takes this by a mm, he had the punches that were just murdering Dis, sorry Dis, but you also had a nice verse, but Enygma takes the Win in "My Honest Opinion".

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420 - good spit didnt ryme at some spots but had some sweet flow and good punches.

Best Line - Know Your Pumped Up Now, Your 'GayBoyFriend-Left',/
The Only 187 You Talking Bout Fucking His 'A$$-To-Death'/

Worst Line - none

Eny - liked your shit it flowed well, close battle.. liked your punches and flow was alright.

Best Line - My rhymes are Drastic, I'll take you to school, come get your Ass Kicked//
I made the grade, she barely Passed It, I'm Ill enough to make her Class Sic//

Worst Line - I'm Sayin, why's this bitch Beggin, she wants to Spit After Me//
Beat the booty off this bitch? dawg.......I just Disassed Her..... Peace//


OVERALL - I gotta give this to 420 cuz her flow was better, punches were almost even, and 420's multi's were better. Work on your flow E and step up on the multi's.

Vote - 420

can you hit up this battle plz..http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118405 only need 2 more votes ofr the DQ.

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This battle was close but this is how it goes down

Enygma
structure 8/10
flow 7/10
punchlines 8/10
creativity 7/10
word usage 8/10
total - 38

D.P. (sorry, had to shorten it)
structure 8/10
flow 7/10
punchlines 7/10
creativity 8/10
word usage 7/10
total - 37

Very, very close battle. BP would have had this one but she 'fell off' her creativity from the middle towards the end. Nice try though babygurl. Good and consistent flow, enygma.

v - E

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