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that is the shitiest vote ever you bitch

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who u calli na bitch u ho ass nigga wha u wanna do u nerd kinda nigga live in brooklyn tryna rap on the computer A BITCH NIGGA

notorious man, you have to work on the punches. half of them weren't punches, or were just really weak.

"im freestylin, to a shitty beat...
but ill fill your mind, with thoughts like a kid and MTV..."

wtf??

Yeah, both of you had problems with flow and structure, but DP gets it for at least having somewhat consistent punches and worldplay.

Hit up my battles.

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Yeah My Structure & Flow Was Off' .. lol..!!! Couldn't Help It Though!! But Good Lookin Out Upppppppppppin 4Votes On This Shit

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ok...
breakdown...
opener - neither...mc's didnt rhyme n was a horrible punch and disasters was stretched wit no flow....
flow - DP...cept for her opener erything was perfectly flowin...mc werk on linin up ur lines....
structure - mc...easier to read...
punches - DP...her punches were direct while mc's where played...werk on this mc
closer - DP...had some nice multis in it...
vote - DP
well mc ive seen better from u....keep elevatin kid cuz u got potential...werk on landing direct punches...and use better personals....
DP..easy win...love readin ya shit....nice verse
ok return the favor in my topical please!!! i want it closed...honest votes only
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118924

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

quit fuckin takin sides damn it, my verse was deff better structured and it actually RHYMED

w/e uppin the votes

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Thanks L.I. Appriciate The Honest Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Still Upppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!!

C'Mon People Don't Sleep On It!!

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C'Mon Ya'll & Drop A Damn Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quit Sleepin On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votesssss

Appriciate - Honest Votes -

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What Does It Take To Get A Couple Votes Around Here On Our Verses C'Mon Ya'll Quit Sleepin On This Shit!!! And Drop Some Honest Votes!!!' ..

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today please

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Structure: mc was better...easier to read. DP structure...no comment

FlowP had the better flow but it was choppy in some places. Mc flowed to but the few unrhymed words threw it off some..Example, the first line ended with 'rap' and the second line ended with 'ass'. Total threw me off balance

Vocab: Pretty much equal...Didnt need a dictionary to read it, but yet at the same time didnt have to think to much.

Punches: Both had punches, DP's came off harder though

Overall vote: DP

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