Lol Kingz Got This Shit!!' .....

Break Down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Check King'S Lines:

who u calling a hoe son?....im pimp ya ass out
theys no money to be made from you...thas without doubt

^An Alright Opener Could Have Been Improved A Bit 8/10

why u call yourself 'poll'?....cos you aint even gunna get one 'vote'
im about to murder this kid...with four more 'punches' to his throat

^Nice Punchline' ...!!! I Like That' ... 9/10

'Poll' stop upping for 'dick riding' votes...look this kid got an 'erection'
why so serious?....this is a rap battle...not a presidential 'election'

^^This Line MERKED' JPoll' .. Badd lol... 10/10 Awsome Closer!!


Vote: Kingz

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Punchz- Kingz had more an better punchz in his verse, Jpoll had some punchz too but I feelt they really wasent hittin dat hard..

Structure- Both of you had good structure, both verses was easy to read

Multis- Kingz had more multis an they sounded good together for example
"you new to RB..lemme show you how this shit goes
punches and flows..so shocking...ya jaw drop down to ya toes"... I dident really noticed any good ones in Jpolls shit

Metas- Kingz got this too.. with that hocky line, i dident really see any metas with Jpolls verse..


this battle was pretty one sided.. i say kingz took this easily..

vote=kingz

i think it was pretty retarded how kingz had to put things in brackets to have it make sense. it should just make sense or you should just not say it. jpoll was original. i vote jpoll.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

King Came Way Harder Than That Jpoll Cat My Vote Goes To King

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i think Kingz is the winner automatically because that dude says he battles vet's when his a flyweight
plus the punches,structure,rhyme and everything Kingz was winning so my vote is for Kingz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119676

hit this battle up right quick aight ya'll.

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uppin........................ come on ya'll lets get this ish closed

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yo come you vote!!!... i will return a honest vote jus leave ya links

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