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Triple_N 5 62.50%
Sten. Cell 3 37.50%
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Old 04-18-04, 10:51 PM   #1
Oc6 The Caustic
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My Breakdown

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Opener: This most defintley goes to Sten. Cell. That line was the illest of the battle:
Flow/Structure: I give this to Triple N. Sten, your structure wasn't as strong as Triple N's, you kept falling off towards the end of your flow.
Vocab/Wordplay: This goes to Sten, he intertwined so many words together that made most of his lines good. Triple N, yours was decent, but Sten. most def. has this topic covered.
Punches: This goes to Triple N. You had nice hard hits and this is what your known for, all of your punches were good and hard. Sten. Your punches got weaker as your verse went down, try to keep on top with that.
Multi's: I give this to Triple N, Sten, you had Multi's but Triple N has a good perspective on them and your Multi's didn't seem as strong. Try to work on that.

Triple N, you barley got this one. I have seen you way better then this.
Sten Cell, try to work on punches and Multi's. Your structure seems good.

Vote- Triple N good battle.
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Old 04-15-04, 04:12 PM   #2
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yo triple you did phat as hell you know have earned my respect u just destroyed hime esspecially at the endI'm too sick for you, doctors inject me into people as a vacination/
For u no vendication, or ego inflation, stick wit ya best talent "masterbation"/
that is so sweet 4 real
stencell u did good but not good enought to earn my vote it was a good battle but triple n had better punches it was funny urs was boring my vote swings the way of triple N
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Old 04-16-04, 03:41 PM   #3
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Uppin this for votes, holla back y'all^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Old 04-16-04, 05:00 PM   #4
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You style is old an played out like "patti labelle"/
You impersonate an emcee better than "dave chappelle"/

^Nice Opener!!! 9/10

I give ya props u spit for all ya worth, but sorry welcome to eath/
You punches are lighter that nerf, an your delivery is similar to papa smurf/

^ Nice Multies' .... And Good Punchline 9/10

I'm too sick for you, doctors inject me into people as a vacination/
For u no vendication, or ego inflation, stick wit ya best talent "masterbation"/

^Closer Fell A Bit Short' .. But Nice.... Also 9/10

Vote: Triple_N
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Old 04-16-04, 11:19 PM   #5
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Uppin for some well explained votes, holla^^^^^^^^
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Old 04-17-04, 05:44 PM   #6
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Uppin for some votes, quit sleeping on this^^^^^^^^
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Old 04-17-04, 05:55 PM   #7
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119676

hit this battle up right quick aight ya'll.
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Old 04-17-04, 06:01 PM   #8
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nice battle

triple n came nice with multies and some hard punchs the opener was pretty nice closer had a bunch of multies and a pretty decent good punch and some solid punchs threw the whole verse it didnt flow that well though and had decent wordplay

sten cell had beter wordplay and a good openin punch that shit was pretty sick but the rest had a few good punchs closer was kinda off overall a decent verse

vote triple n
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Old 04-18-04, 06:13 PM   #9
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Uppin for votes, well explained votes needed, come on y'all close this out
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Old 04-19-04, 12:00 AM   #10
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Old 04-19-04, 12:15 AM   #11
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overall this was aight sten cell had some decent lines his punches were aightso was his flow could of did better tiple n was pretty decent to he also had some good punches and personalshe also could of did better but the that stood out the most is sten cell so he gets my vote nuff said
 
Old 04-19-04, 04:26 PM   #12
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Uppin for votes, explain your votes people, holla back!!
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Old 04-19-04, 08:11 PM   #13
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breakdown for triple_n:

flow:mah not great i thought it was kinda choppy 5/10

volcab:alright better then average 7/10

punches:best line,"You style is old an played out like "patti labelle"/" and even it was kinda played out not a great job i bet you can do better 6/10

overall:18/30

breakdown for sten cell:

flow:alright nothing amazing though 6/10

volcab:good job kinda basic 6/10

punches:nothing real quotable, i didn't see any lines that really stood out here 5/10

overall:17/30

vote--triple_n gets my vote
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