if you reached your apex you still couldnt exceed my versitility//
lyrical creativity to surpass the cosmos is my only responsibility//
its not an optional decition to lacerate these edible opposites//
king set many opsticals so i cant levate as an incredible apocalipse//
im fuly equipt to make you suffer wit elepisy when i make advancements//
this synthetic mc wil neva elevate,so thers no need 4 my enhancements//
look king could neva excell wit an adolecent style so basic//
wile he proceed 2 a certain extent,i defy da laws of science wit my fisical matrix//
this kid should have known im restricted to looses in this textin section//
when i get in this textual territory i leave m.cs shell shocked in deception//

sorry got o go...i just got in trouble..i will get on next period

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This was a sick battle wiv Kingz spittin out some of the funniest shit i've heard.
creativitie u had a few good lines in there
if you reached your apex you still couldnt exceed my versitility//
lyrical creativity to surpass the cosmos is my only responsibility//
its not an optional decition to lacerate these edible opposites//
king set many opsticals so i cant levate as an incredible apocalipse//

Kingz, ure rip was non stop sick from start 2 finish
u started wiv a solid punch, threw some good ones in between and finished with tha knockout blow.

Vote=Kingz

Vote on my shit so i can free up a spot and battle some ova bitches
franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 1-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

uppin............................................. .

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aye yo kid.....i wasnt finished..i just got caught up by the teacher,,......i still had to perfect my shit..and fix structure...and make my punches hardeer.........and i wall also gonnin to make a few lines longer but i can tnow...owell.....
....................................uppin for some votes.......................................

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Nice battle but creativitie knida got a little stuck and he played off your name change and siggy and stuff kinda koo but no crew vote but nice shit

yo good battle...you both came with really different styles...i liked them both...but do think king came with better...more punches personals and such so here's the break down

kingz
bestline
Im gonna take over ‘Sacramento’….cos it’s the home of the ‘kings’
Keep ya hood as my memento….cos you aint got any nba ‘rings'
worst...all the liines were above par

flow...9/10
punches...10/10
personal....9/10
humor....8/10
extras...7/10

overall....43

Creativitie
bestline
im fuly equipt to make you suffer wit elepisy when i make advancements//
this synthetic mc wil neva elevate,so thers no need 4 my enhancements

worst line
ook king could neva excell wit an adolecent style so basic//
wile he proceed 2 a certain extent,i defy da laws of science wit my fisical matrix//
i'm not big fan of this right here...wording...the meaning was aight
flow...7/10
punches...7/10
personal...6/10
humor....4/10
extras....10/10 vocab
overall...34/50

v- kingz

look this kid is dick ridin,..rite afta king voted for jpoll and his battle jpoll voted for him...thats strictly d/r........

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actually i was writting the whole time and i didn't know who he voted for....you came sick too though....i wish your teacher wouldn't have caught you cause it would have been tight...

no it not because jpoll verse was better. i only drop honest votes. i think i deserve to win this one too.

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hey both you guys voted for me against strreetsweepa and only one of you voted...could the other person please vote...thanks...respect to both mc's

see jpoll knows its adick ride vote thats why he tryn to give me compliments and shit....fuckin d/r i hate that shit

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creativitie wot u mean d/r? u vote for him too! he clearly had the better verse
wot u buggin for?

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nah i think if i would have voted first for him i would have this vote ......fuc it.. i aint trippen.....may the best man win......

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creativity was ok but Kingz got the name he had sturcture, rhyme, ending, and punches thats it he wins my vote

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