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Killah Bwoy 2 28.57%
DisasterPeice420 5 71.43%
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Old 04-15-04, 11:40 PM   #1
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Breakdown:
Punches: Neither
Metas: Neither
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Disaster
Flow: Disaster
Disses: Disaster

Overall-This Battle Was Different.I Didnt See Any Credible Puns If Any At All.Killah's Verse Was Too Choppy With The Flow.His Bars Were Too Long.Having Stretched Lines Makes Your Scripts Look Unorganized.When The Reader Is Going Over Your Verse,Having Stretched Lines Makes It Take Forever To Get To The End.By The Time You Do Reach The End Of The Sentence,You've Forgotten Which Lines Go Together.Plus It Takes Longer To Get To The Point Or For A Punch To Get Delivered,etc...A Lot Of Killah's Lines Were Weak & He Didnt Use Any Complexity Either.Disaster's Verse Was Based On Disses.She Used Them Better But Lacked With Puns.

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Old 04-16-04, 01:33 PM   #2
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D Peice - flow
killahPucnches
D-Multis
D- Vocab
Personals- D

She had more lines, but that's not neccesarily why she won. She had good punches, but killah was a lil' harder. But I thought she far outclassed him everywhere else. Killah, came hard, but your shit was madd hard for me to read, and it kinda fucked it up for me. Both y'all stay doin' yo thang though, fosho. Good battle
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Old 04-16-04, 01:43 AM   #3
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yo this was a koo battle for both
a bit dry, but maybe thats due to the length
ive definately seen better from disaster, and i thoght this verse was average
the vocab was cliche', and so were the punches, although i like her raw agressive approach. but u just didint do nething to beat this other cat( shouldve won)

killah had a few punches that were unique, and although they didnt hit that hard i like the creative effort. also the structure needs some work but i give killa the win for inginuity, and better personals

just call it how i c it
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Old 04-16-04, 02:01 AM   #4
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whoa good battle y'all, Killa you had some good metaphors in ya shit I like it but I don't think they were real solid punches dogg, but you had a solid verse good multies an vocab, but you did kinda mess up flow with strecthed lines
Dp yo you had a good verse pretty good punches, they weren't all that strong but thry were stronger than killa's, you had strong vocab(see u didn't get my beastiality punch, well I didn't get yours either, its hard to make a setup for that) good multies and personals, alittle wordplay too, good shit
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Old 04-16-04, 12:39 PM   #5
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Old 04-16-04, 01:06 PM   #6
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Old 04-16-04, 01:32 PM   #8
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Fuck all these DR votes, My vote is for Crhyme Sindicate.......*cough* I mean.....um.... Killah cause his shit was doper (if that's even a word)........lol. Just kiddin. I ain't gonna vote cause I may be partial to my crew but I couldn't decide anyways.

Killah had some pretty creative punches and had me giggle a bit, but the stretched ass lines killed it dawg. overal it was a good verse. Keep It Up!

DP was fuckin SHITTY........ just kiddin girl. I think you took this layin down like a lazy ass prostitute..........lol. There seemed like almost no effort on your part and you coulda used some cause this kid might actually beat ya. Put forth some effort next time. I like to see some of the shit you come up wit...........

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