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Ok...BAR BY BAR BREAKDOWN!!!!

Tha cannon will have the whole front of ya Chyrsler Bent.
Son I'll spread hammerz N clips under ya arm pitt like Deordorant.
Ok it was a nice attempt at a meta bt it didnt werk...why would you put clips UNDER his arm....nice try tho...4/10
Fuck that I'll clap ya mug N have ya whole ride covered in Blood.
Throw you in a ditch N cover ya whole body with mudd.
No punch...just sayin whut ur gonna do...no multi's...nothing...2/10
Homie like Crips N Bloodz.
Ya face a get cracked with them clips N sluggz.
Stretched line...boring punch...2/10
This guy a Phrat head prolly downing Them Kegs.
I'll put the ridge 2 ya ribs N make you really see the "Shadows edge".
Attempted a personal...but didnt werk...not a good set up line either...3/10
The oven a cook ya face in tha kitchen.
When you see 2 bisquites.
???...0/10
This dude a scream like a pair of 2 bitches.
I clap for the richies.
nothing...1/10
This nigga can "Hold that" I pack the Titanium gat .
Get ya whole Cranium cracked.
Ok there was a lil mutli so u get credit for that...not a good punch...5/10
So before you rap.
Find U a map so U can find another place to lay that piece of Bullshit.
Didnt rhyme...STRETCHED LIKE A MOTHERFUCKER!!!...3/10

Verse Score - 22/80

Well u need to elevate in every category...u can jus battle by rhyming werds....u need to use personals and get better punches....use multi's....i suggest going to tutorials and jus readin on stuff to do.....ok elevate man....

Yo how you think you gonna win them punches simplistic
When you dealing with a master linguist, lyrics ballistic
No punch really...but good vocab...n a lil multi in there...decent opener...6/10
That got your brains smear, I'm revered and feared cuz I make carreers disappear
How you gonna persevere here when my spit so hard it leave your face reengineered?
Okay multis galore...nice multis...seems like ur focusing more on vocab than punches...7/10
I'm lightyears ahead, like if I was your breath you couldn't catch me
Don't even act tough, only 9 you got you drew on a etch-a-sketch, g
Nice punch...good personal...8/10
I'll get 5 votes in quick succession, even now the W in my possession
Especially when your whole verse is a fake gansta impression
Nice punch...hard hitting...good multis....10/10
Fuck your hammers, this verse like a hammer throw, leave you with a L bestow
Would have been better off with another no show, look at your record and its like a bowl of cherios, all "Oh"
Like the crowd when I'm at the mic, cheering when I land each blow
Nice personal...messed up flow...good multi's...ok punch...but putting vocab in front of punches...8/10
Dog your punches all miss while mine diss subliminal
The shit I just pulled man, it ought to be criminal
It was a good set up line but u didnt land a punch...5/10
Apply the pressure, your heart blown a gasket n i got your brain in a basket
This is what happens when you leave/live life at the edge - you end in the casket.
Ok punch...decent closer....6/10

Verse Score - 50/70

Ok...u need to focus on punches...ur usin big vocab but not landing punches....the punch category is more important than the vocab category...trust me....so either land punches wit the big vocab or werk wit a lil vocab...punches makes ur verse hot or flop....so elevate there...u got potential....keep elevatin...n focus on punches...good win

VOTE - SHADOWS EDGE

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shadows edge getz my vote

he had a better verse overall he came with harder punchs lines were kinda stretched in this battle but still flowed pretty well had a better opener and closer the east miles did and more multis nice verse closer was pretty good wordplay off your name

easmiles dont know if this was your first battle but you only had 1 personal and it was pretty decent and your punchs didnt hit very hard might of been cause they werent set up very well

no hate just an honest vote

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Shadow you got this one give me a rematch and hit this battle up to see if I'm worthy
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119676

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East Miles

aight thanks man.. yeah im just kinda fucking around with vocab right now.. working on punches. uppin for more honest votes ^

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East Miles

upping for votes.. i've voted on almost every battle on the front page... hit this up people!

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This was a one sided battle....east miles ya verse needed alot of work, undeveloped punches, no personals, wordplay, basic vocab, bad flow, an amaetuer structure, you really nedd to elevate
Shadow...good verse ya highlights was ya multies and vocab usage, punches coulda been stronger, nice flow, solid structure, a little wordplay, not many personals...but solid verse u get my vote
Vote: Shadow
Holla
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119667

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last uppin for the night before i head off to sleep... just one more vote.

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uppin again ^^ just one more vote.. drop a link and ill give an honest vote on your battle.

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v-to shadow edge. he had multies, way better vocab, flow was tight, didnt really understand it all but killed east milez. shadowedge gotta use more metaphors or similies. east milez was aiight, but you a little too basic. but this was no competition for shadowsedge, he won this for sure.