Im not at 25 posts yet i dont think, so i cant vote on anyone elses

no hate but both verses need work. im not feeling both verses but here is the break down
flow. both were sorta wack. puerto edged it out by a bit.
personals.ill teacher made attempts but they were sorta weak.
puerto´s nice personal.
call u ill teacha cuz yur rhymes make me sick,
weak ass rhymes, this principal'll fire yo ass quick/
multies. none
metaphors. none really
wordplay.puerto, not much
vocabulary. puerto
punches.
puertos ending was good, in between is wack.
& like ludacris ill show ya sum southern hospitality,
done wit this bitch now ill kill ya witta lyrical fatality
but u arent from the south, your from nyc

shit was real offical nah mean PRNelly ripped holla cha boi http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120192

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as oonas yall spit pm me. i really wanna vote on this joint. meanwhile vote on this:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115437

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This Battle Was Not Good But If I Had To Vote I Would Give It To I'll Teacher B/c Hic Lines Were More Personal.
Winner= Ill Teacher

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I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

Uppin for votes here

yo
ill teacher you wuz talkin bout some UN-NEEDED sh*t in your verse.
PRNelly had a better verse puches and sh*t.

imma have to go with PRNelly

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What was uneeded in my verse??