aight close battle right here.... both verses werent to good but the one your rhymes are played your first lines everything ation try to mix shit up a lil bit Violation to Va if your the original ive seen better from you yo return da favor

VA takes this

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itte thanx keep"Em coming uppin dem votes ill return da honset favor

good battle ya'll....

structure-v-t-va2...the one i couldn't really understand where ya bars stoped at
punchlines-v-t-va2
multi's-v-t-va2
personals-the one he had like wun
enjoyed-v-t-va2....he had da betta battle verse all around and he had alot of multi's so dat made it hotter nahmean...the one ya shit was good u gota fix ya structure a lil bit then you'll be good

my vote- v t va2...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120324
^^^there go my battle rite there can ya'll return da favor

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

itte thanx ill return da honest favor ittte uppin dem vote

Yo Whats Up// Yo The One Had Dis Good Flowz And Nice Punchlines Dog I Liked Yo Shit//


V-t-a Work On Yo Punchlines Homie// U Had Some Good Ones// But U Wasent Hittin Hard Enough//nice Flowz//and Nic Vocab


Vote=the One

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

dis was really a sloppy battle
va2 u came wit some alright shit some tite punches and sum tite vocab
the one yo strucutre was fucked up u had some ite shit but yo structure was fucked up

the one
bestline-only 15 but real thorough thought you herd im not b2k but you will get served

^^ ite line

worsteline-i could stop right there and still pull off a win and if this faggot runs his mouht im gonna pull off his skin


wack^^^

v2

bestline-yo insults suppose to hurt they didn't work,when i spit dez verses itta be tyme 4 you to merk\\

^^ ok

worsteline-its gonna be rain playin out lyrics,so much rain flood of flows da word will hear it\


one-

open-7/10
punches-7/10
personals-7/10
structure-6/10
vocab-7/10
flow-7/10
close-8/10
overall-7.2/10

v2-
open-8//10
punches-7/10
personals-8.2/10
structure-8.7/10
vocab-8/10
flow-8.1/10
close-8/10
overall-8.1/10

winner-v2

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