http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120529
^^^vote here since I voted in urs.

DeLeon,your flow man.You can't just go from a big line to a short line.It makes it uneven and it doesn't flow well.For example-
"spit your gay ass shit and try ta beat my rhyme/"
"motherfucka I aint got time to waste-take out my blade-slice ya face, you's fucken disgrace/"
Your punches were okay,but could have been better if you flowed it better.And I don't mean to go adding fillers.Just work a little more, man.

Vote-Lost Child

Yo I Have To Give It Up Fo Lc Cuz Da Nigga Had Hard Punchlines Just Plain And Simple// Nice Flowz// And Nigga Improve Yo Struture

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120273
yo return the fvour

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Lostchild had that. Every line hit. Most didnt go hard but u killed that cat. I thought this was the worst line
I'd be roca-fella You couldn't even sign with cashmoney
Yo label a take yo money cause you a fucking dummy
It was alright but could have been better.
Deleon i think u need some practice u alright but just hit harder next time

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Vote for mine honestly
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120615

uppin for votes....................................

Uppin for votes.....................................