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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Quickpunch 4 44.44%
insidious 5 55.56%
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Old 04-26-04, 05:43 PM   #1
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Yo this was a good a good battle but I was feelin insidious verse more. Quick
ur verse was good but I think u coulda came harder. The endin didnt really close the deal for me u coulda up it a bunch. Insidious had me rollin with this shit-

by the end of this rhyme i'll have u spinnin in ya chair,
screamin to ya mommy "NO NO NO! INSIDIOUS DOESN'T PLAY FAIR!",
my line's hit u like they were concrete, everythings solid in my spit,
after u read this and 'digest it' it'll leave u shittin bricks

The endin was not that good but Overall I think u got this

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Old 04-26-04, 03:29 PM   #2
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ight thanks for the honest votes yalll....keep hittin this up ight?...we'll return the honest votes in ur battles so drop a link also
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Old 04-26-04, 04:52 PM   #3
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A'ight...wasn't tha greatest battle...

QuickP...your structure is fucked...but luckily I don't vote for battles on structure. I thought your punches hit where it hurts...you kept it fresh during everyline, other than dykes and shit...homosexual jokes are played...don't use 'em...overall, a'ight verse, could use some werk, biggest downfall was the structure and flow...

7/10

Inisidious...not a great verse...punches were played...personals were weak...the biggest accomplsihment in your verse was your flow and structure, but that still wasn't the best...overall...werk on ya shit...

4/10

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No hate...hit this up honestly...thx...

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Old 04-26-04, 04:56 PM   #4
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ight thanks for the honesty....hit this up with honest well explained votes..dont just say 2 setences and vote cause it wont count...hit this up
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Old 04-26-04, 05:12 PM   #5
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well this was a good like he said both of them was kind of evenly matched in the end i gone give it to in sidous// i say this because of one thing he had over qiuck punch he was funny/ qiuck had a betta opening and endind but his flow went on and off but those other two made it a good battle note: this was a hard battle to choosse to from
 
Old 04-26-04, 05:24 PM   #6
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aiyo this was a pretty weak battle...

Quickpunch
Structure-2/10
Punches2/10-there was only one...
you need to type and rephrase your shit a lil better man

Insidiou...you lacked in all categories....I see where u goin with ya shit...but u need to connect ya punches and be a lil more smooth and original

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Old 04-26-04, 05:25 PM   #7
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ight yall keep the honest votes coming....will return ur battles with an honest vote...REMEMBER THAT
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Old 04-26-04, 05:57 PM   #8
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aight this was an ok battle could of been better well anyways
QP=u did alright i know u could of did better some of ur punches hit hard not all thoughur structure was ok so was ur flow u could of elevated that would of helped
overall ill say like a 7/10

insid=u did ok but i was gettin the feelin like u didnt even try...u shouldent have to clarify wut some of ur lines mean..i got wut they mean though people could figure it out u know wut i mean well anyways ur structure was ok ur flow was cool u could of hit harder wit ur punches u could of elevated so overall i'll say ummm.6/10
u should battle him again this was a close battle so my vote goes to QP
 
Old 04-26-04, 06:26 PM   #9
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thank's for the honest votes! i explained mine tho, cuz i've seen ppl doing it, and even tho to most of us it's obvious, there're a select few who do'nt get it, lol, and JUST INCASE THEY VOTE i want them to know what up. but that's straight ecko, good lookin out. let's get some more votes, this is clizzose!
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Old 04-26-04, 06:29 PM   #10
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vote for my battle agaisnt da jazz and i will return the favor
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3. da jazz :easy ass win also funny battle
4. young jigga :fun battles althought i won easyly
5. youndkd33: that bitch was a whiner about lines oh well i still win
 
Old 04-26-04, 06:41 PM   #11
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ight thanks for the votes yall...keep it comin...thanks ....we'll return the favor in honesty votes
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Old 04-26-04, 06:42 PM   #12
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this was a hot battle yo but sid had better punches and word play but punch had better flow but it was close but ma vote is

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Old 04-26-04, 06:43 PM   #13
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did u already vote in here? oh wait, u couldn't decide, i'll go ahead and vote in urs, just cuz i got nothin to do.
peace
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won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81
 
Old 04-26-04, 06:45 PM   #14
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^^^that was to vinman.

oh shit...this is close punch, let's get that last vote in! good luck punch
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won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81
 
Old 04-26-04, 06:49 PM   #15
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hey isnce i voted yall battles can you look at my battle agaisnt da jazz i will return the favor again thanks
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3. da jazz :easy ass win also funny battle
4. young jigga :fun battles althought i won easyly
5. youndkd33: that bitch was a whiner about lines oh well i still win
 
 


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