i give it 2 vango, not much between them but vango's had more originality
both structures were good, but i feel both never put as much thought in to it as they shud have, the better thread was from vango

^^wtf
I dont see how Vango is gettin any votes here
it's bullshit
Adeb gave it to him
Vango came with played lines that was played out 6 months ago
Adeb had some good solid punches
Vango was comin with weak punches thruout his whole verse like thet lite beer line
fuckin garbage
vote adeb
for a better verrse
with better punches
and better everything period

Breakdown

Ad

Flow: Good for the most part, Opener Kinda lost me though
Punches: Pretty good wack/track bar was nice
Personals: Closer was good, a few others
Multis: None that I saw
Vocab: Average
Opener: Lost me
Closer: Madd nice

Fav Bar:

Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show
Then pack up and leave relaunched...
just get in ya van

and go

Good personal, and sicwidit

Van Go

Flow: Madd stretced in parts, and the Fillin'/Appealin' bar is a stretch
Punches: Audacity/Cassidy bar was good, otha than that, lackin'
Personals: None
Multis: A few in there
Vocab: Aight
Opener: Pretty Good
Closer: Didn't like it, it was stretched and just a weak and kinda played concept

Fav Bar:

How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity,
im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy

VanGo's lines was kinda throwback, like that nigga said, and flow was a lil' off. Ad had a good, not great effort, but it was solid.

Vote: Adebisi

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vango
good battle liked it. you had good flow and style i really liked the last bar was great

adebisi
was ok wasnt as good as vango but you could of been better

Vote Vango

LMAO at everyone that knows anything voting for me...

And all the newbie fucks voting for him...

This is why this site lacks talent

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So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings

flashbacks
rofl
this WHOLE SITE lacks talent

Vango? Hell no... I'm tired of these fucking newbies
So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings
Not that bad.....could have had a better opener
See what it brings... when you be flipping concepts that are still wack
I mean kids got more throwback rhymes in his verse than a Fabolous track
Not really a punch...throwback rhymes? He's just a kid, he doesn't have any throwback rhymes....
I've had it you fag, you cant win... so why try?
When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life
*laughs* That one was a little funny....
I'm that nice... while you're just another ugly dude
Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you
Sounds like something I heard in third grade, but I think it was worded better back then.....
Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show
Then pack up and leave relaunched...
just get in ya van

and go
Not a bad closer, but it wasn't really good either...



How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity,
im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy
Not that bad.....
See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career
cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer
Gay.....
Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme
BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING
Even more gay....
So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike
this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike
Zzzzz......
you battlin me is like a sword with no blade, a gun with no bullets and a lamp with no shade
Is it over yet?
SEe you got as much chance of beating me as you do winnin the lottery
cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me
Not bad but way too streched.....


Overall I expected a lot more from this battle......Adebisi came with a couple of OK punches but nothin too spectacular. I guess I just expected more from him. Flow was good except for one stretched line........ Vango didn't have that many punches. Flow was OK but stretched in some places.....I really thought this was going to be a battle of wits but it turned into a battle of shit!

Vote - Adebisi for atleast makin me smile with a line......

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breakdown for adebisi:

flow:good job nothing wrong here 7/10

volcab:alright not the best i've seen but good job 6/10

punches:some nice personals not too many lines overall but still pretty strong what you had my fav,"When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life"6/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for vango:

flow:i thought it could of been better it was kinda choppy through most of it 5/10

volcab:good use specially threw the first half difenatly better then your oppenent 7/10

punches:some alright lines here not too many and a couple were kinda played but good job best line,"So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike
this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike" ha ha ha funny anyway 8/10

overall:20/30

vote--vango slightly better verse

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Even the person that runs the league is an idiot

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lmao , Cprogress & Strobe should have made a vet run the league.
oh well you`ll soon see the difference between a messy league and a tidy league.

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RB Text Tourney Finalist
Orginal Relaunched Member.
Password Aka The Masked
2nd Moderator on Rapverse Ever
Not quite legendary yet....

you are an idiot, i would kill your weak ass in a battle

^^^

No you wouldnt

You thouroughly suck

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kid you are fucking horrible, i dropped my verse cuz i didnt think i would need much after seeing your wack ass shit, i didnt take into effect all your d/r on this site. we can bring it to elevated if you really want it. you might not have enough wins for that you herb.

How about this

We bring it to the real RB?

And then we watch you get laughed at

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