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Old 04-29-04, 04:42 PM   #16
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yo this shit was tite and had a nice flow and aight vocab. i liked it a lot. keep elevating aight.


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Old 04-29-04, 09:44 PM   #17
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any helpful feedback?
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Old 04-30-04, 12:53 AM   #18
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that was good better than average ok
i dont know whats up with these apologies
sounds like your stupid or somethin' ya know?
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Old 04-30-04, 01:25 AM   #19
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because u dont know the story behind it. No newb feedback from now on please.
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Old 05-01-04, 05:15 PM   #20
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shits gettin slept on...
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Old 05-01-04, 05:21 PM   #21
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yo, man. That was some hot shit. Your stuff is gettin' pretty hot. I liked your word play usuage. Your vocab was pretty decent. The flow was a LITTLE shaky on some parts, but overall it was hot. 8/10

yo,c heck out my open mic:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121751
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Old 05-02-04, 07:09 AM   #22
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uppin' for feedback on my boys verse. please leave an honest response for him. one love.

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Old 05-02-04, 10:00 AM   #23
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ZZzzzzz.........Huh? What?......ohh, sorry. I was sleepin.........just kiddin. I already told you how good it was, I was just tryin to up this again for ya.....
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Old 05-02-04, 10:41 AM   #24
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sik rhymes mayb u cud help me wit mine peace BIG UPS
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Old 05-02-04, 03:15 PM   #25
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man that was some quality rymin
that had good flow and good timin
man that was cool the way yo apologized to the other mc's
that makes u the coolest on rb

(hey ya see how it all rhymed !!!)
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Old 05-02-04, 04:04 PM   #26
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care to take me off of your blacklist?
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Old 05-02-04, 04:52 PM   #27
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shit was hot. keep doin your thing.
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Old 05-04-04, 10:23 AM   #28
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care to take me off of your blacklist?


yeah, im takin every name off of it.
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Old 05-04-04, 08:43 PM   #29
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VERY ADVANCED!

nice word useage and flow. Like the beats and the flavor. Wafflehouse.
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Old 05-07-04, 12:58 PM   #30
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wafflehouse?? umm.. any other feedback.
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