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creaTivitie 5 83.33%
Phat Mic 1 16.67%
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Old 05-10-04, 03:07 PM   #16
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Old 05-10-04, 03:12 PM   #17
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this battle was alright
v/creativite for the better verse
he had more solid punches
phat mic
all your punches were played and the explainations were gay
the people are not stupid
you dont have to explain them
anyway
creativite this
good job
both of you elevate
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431
hit that up
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Old 05-10-04, 04:03 PM   #18
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Flow: Well, Phat Mic had a coupla ill-stretched bars, Creative wins this category, but I wasn't feelin' the one part where he rhymed three in a row.
Vocab:Creative's was better
Punches: Phat, That KKK line was fuckin' killa (and I'm black by the way, well at least half, so don't hate)
Multis: Phat, but mostly through usin' stretched bars
Personals:Creative, DisasterMaster bar, not hard, but effective
Opener: about even, the benzino shit was aight, But Creative came wit a personal, of the bat, always good
Closer: Creative. Coulda been betta, but Phat had a madd stretched one

Fav Bars:

Phat Mic

He'll get handed an "L"; despite that he fights as hard~as~he~can
It's kinda like "He'd Only Get A Clue"(Klu) if he was "Part~Of~The~Klan"

Best bar in the battle, hands down.

Creative

but dat doesnt change who u are...and wont full fill ur dreams//
cuz your style is still worn out like da knee part on ur moms jeans//

Just liked it

Phat, you need to stop stretchin' your lines so much, and you'll be more effective.

Vote/ Creative
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Old 05-10-04, 04:29 PM   #19
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You better believe I'm wild; with "Nice" lyrics but you'll "See~no~smile"
& you'll get beat down for being a "Son of a Bitch" like "Benzino's~child"
^Shit Aint Even Feelin The Opener!!' .. 3/10

He'll get handed an "L"; despite that he fights as hard~as~he~can
It's kinda like "He'd Only Get A Clue"(Klu) if he was "Part~Of~The~Klan"
^Nice Punch' I Like That 10/10

I'll watch you lay-and-choke as the wetness of the spit takes you from flames-to-smoke
I blame-you-loke, call PSA pothead employers; We used ya resume-to-smoke
^Was Quite Lame' Anybody Will Agree With Me!!! 2/10

You getting-the-L-yo and ya threads for pussies like women's-apparel
You used to roll with Daclassic but you left so you're at the wrong end-of-the-barrel
^Ok...?? 3/10

You barely getting to learn-this-course-dog; I'm schooling you, just earn-ya-forced-fall
I'll burn-ya-fort-dog; Trust you'll never CD(see D) like a nerd's-report-card
^Weak Closer' ... 4/10!!

Alright Switch The Flipt Real Quick!!

Checckit Checck CreaTiviTie:

phat mic is da prime example of y this site gets put in shame//
failed to suceed as DISASTERMASTER so dicided to change ur name//
^Should Of Thought Up Something Better' ..!! Wasnt A Bad Opener .. But Wasnt Nothing Great Either 6/10

i elevated pass your level so my rymes are flyn over~ya//
claims hes phat mic when he really got MICro phobia//
^Nice Punchline 9/10 ... - Heated

my punchlines hitten your face leavin ya def in mutation//
have u FACIN a loss, now u EYE TO EYE wit a critical devistation//
^Once Again Nice PunchLine' . Right There 9/10

im brinin destruction to the alphabet so these kids cant speak//
MURDEROUSE METHODS is here to devour and conquer over da weak//
^Despite The Lack Of Closer...!! Nice 'Crew Management' There.. But Aint Nothing Against Phat Mic So You Feel Off Short' .. Playa 6/10 ....!!!!

Overall... CreaTiviTie Takes This One' ...!!

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew votes not allowed
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Old 05-10-04, 06:09 PM   #20
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Lmfao' ..!! Ah Ha I Guess IM D/R Ya CreaTivitie' ..!! Anyways

Upppppppin This Shit For My Boi's..!!

Phat Mic & Creativitie' ..!!


Quit Sleepin On This Shit' Yall.. & Drop Some Honest Votes'...!!


Let Me Be The First To Say I Was Not "D'R" My Vote..!!! (Nuff Said)
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Old 05-10-04, 06:14 PM   #21
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no your in his crew...
 
Old 05-11-04, 04:33 PM   #22
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Old 05-11-04, 04:40 PM   #23
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Vote on my battle with marv.. just one vote.. its in Elevated.. I will hit this battle up...
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Old 05-11-04, 05:37 PM   #24
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This battle kinda sucked... creative your only good line was that microphobia one.. I mean ooh your jesus. who cares. Phat, your structure is fucked as hell, and its annoying when your verse splits the bars like that, it doesn't flow very well. On the bright side, you at least came with some semi-original stuff... semi-wordplay. Stop explaining your punches, that's herbish. And stop using punches that need to be explained.

v/ Phat mic or whatever the fuck he's calling himself these days.
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Old 05-12-04, 11:09 AM   #25
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Old 05-13-04, 03:19 PM   #26
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some body end this.........uppin for votes
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Old 05-14-04, 05:49 PM   #27
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aight check it

creativitie
flow:7/10
wordusage:6/10
vocab:6/10
creativitie:7/10
punches:6/10
opener:6/10
closer:5/10
overall:dont feel like counting

comment:quit battling noobs

fav/line:fat girl one

Phat mic:
flow:4/10 (streched)
wordusage:8/10
vocab:5/10
creativitie:7/10
punches:5/10
opener:4/10
closer:5/10
overall:do i have to count

comment: you lines are streched like rosannes range of sexuality

fav/line:nothin

v/creativitie
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