Here we go.....

Killah bwoy came with some stretched lines that didn't have that bad of a flow since they were all atretched to the same length....

Dis is no competition Blast ya with my Lyrikal Ammunition get rid of my opposition../
Walkin under ladders FUCK superstition still beatin you bitch,ASUME THE POSITION../
^^^This is an example of a stretched line. It ruins the rhythem all together.....
It also didn't have any punch in there. people didn't see that all his attempts at punches were mediocre....

Bwoy: come on dawg stop jackin off and drop ur verse...N:SHH im consentratin.../
Its ova dawg dont even drop jus' because i beat you again you aint gotta be hatin../
^^^Weak closer too.....where's the punch? I understand that you freestyled the whole verse but you could have thrown in a couple of punches just to mix things up...


Triple_N came with a basic flow that did flow through out the verse. This made the whole verse easier to read. He had a few stretched lines but not that many......

Faggot niggas like you garanteed to be left on wax
This bitch like a musical instrument, blowin' on dick like it was a sax
You won't get dap, cuz there's no gay rights in rap
No one's gonna root for an emcee that hugs more nuts that "jockstraps"

^^^ Kinda weak for an opener but atleast there was a punch in there......Triple had soem pretty weak attempts at punches but a few did hit a little.....

Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer
Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player

^^^ Most original punch in the battle. It hit kinda hard too.....Triple_N just came with more punches in this one and I think that's what wins battles.....

Vote - Triple_N

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I cant vote cuz I in Killah's crew,but I would give this battle to Triple_N .. no hate Killah your shit was tight, but that was some hot shit I seen from triple man, had some HARD punches. Good Battle Boys would love to see Round 3!!!

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oooh close shit

Killah...hot puches...stretched lines fucked ya up the only reason i'm sayin that is cuz i used to stretch my lines and it does fuck ya up but i flipped styles and shit is workin out for me...just a suggestion but you still killed him wit punches...

9/10

triple not bad shit just didnt compare to killahs

8/10

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My votes gonna have to go with Killa here he came harder to me and he had some sick lines Triples was also hot but i think Killa took it.

Killa 8.5/10
Triple 8/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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thanz dawg...i see peoples hate stretched lines but i am goin to flip the structure next battle..

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Oh and could u all return Honost votes plz...in my sig.

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Yo i gatta give the vote to Killah bwoy... Heres how i break it down...


Killah had nice punches, good flow, good structure, and nice personals

Triple has some alright punches, alrigt flow, structure wasn't bad, but i thought personals kinda lacked

Overall Killah hit harded with personals...and his punches...

My vote goes to killah

giving this 2 triple N. He had the thim and flows and rymes to back his shit up. I'm quite impressed by both rappers but triple ripped him by metas similies and flow. Vote for N, he won dis battle fair n square.

Dis is no competition Blast ya with my Lyrikal Ammunition get rid of my opposition../
Walkin under ladders FUCK superstition still beatin you bitch,ASUME THE POSITION../
i kinda like the anger here... but the lines are still stretched
'Spit razor sharp lyrics..Touch the screen and you'll wind up with ya hands missin'../
Like a fat bitch tryin' to walk to the store, Beatin me is a Fuckin' "Mission"...../
um... i dunno.. wasn't that dope.. you're saying its hard... not a great meta either
I Cause total annihalation This kid can't "drop shit" like a kid with constepation..../
"Your soo cool Bwoy"smack ya in da face,im tryna battle not hold no conversation../
see.. you're forcing mutlis. annhilation has nothing to do with the rest of the line.. and the constipation thing is kinda played..
rearrange ya face cause ya rhymes are ugly like a michael jackson mascalation.../
Read the tutorials I master the arts of rappin' while this bitch "masters- Batin"..../
the wordplay is pretty neat
Bwoy: come on dawg stop jackin off and drop ur verse...N:SHH im consentratin.../
Its ova dawg dont even drop jus' because i beat you again you aint gotta be hatin../
i kinda like that... pretty ok


Faggot niggas like you garanteed to be left on wax
This bitch like a musical instrument, blowin' on dick like it was a sax
nice metah, i like it
You won't get dap, cuz there's no gay rights in rap
No one's gonna root for an emcee that hugs more nuts that "jockstraps"
ok.. pretty nice metah again
Always talkin' bout u hard, when in a real fight u wanna mix an mingle
Claimin u bust shots, only thing this bitch pops is "pringles"
would have been nice to have a multi here with shots, it flows kinda funny to me. but pretty nice punch (probably played, but i havent heard it...)
I'm a do like Ja an 50 an squash this beef like I was lewis farracon
Wastin' my time, ya rhymes couldn't generate heat if they was wearin' "long johns"
eh... not so much
I'm put more pains in ya gut than ab crunches
You beat me, never!, I've felt breast harder than your punches
aight.. pretty nice[/]
Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer
Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player
[b]eh... not so much
This nigga emulates rapper's likes, he wants to scream like "lil john"
All the gurls scream when ya drop ya pants cuz ya got a "lil jon"
eh.. dont like the rhyme... ok punch i guess, but not great
He was put in this forum jus to annoy, he mad cuz I'm the real mccoy
One look at ya pic an I almost died of fright, I guess that why they call u "Killa Bwoy"
hehe.. nice personal.. first ive seen this battle


ok check it... both of you came somewhat inconsistently... killah your rhymes are stretched and you force multis into them that are often irrelevent... and you mix punches with threats in one line, and the punches come out weaker. try using more setups and shrinking your lines, and using metas and wordplay that aren't so played...

triple n... your verse started hot.. fell off at the end big time but then you had a nice closer which also had a personal... both of you guys need to step that shit up on personals. but still, for the better, more original metahs:

v/ triple n

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