opener tie
flow kiklla
vocab tie
structure killa by a lil
closer tie
killa work on vocab and multis and structure a lil
ill work on vocab multis personals and structure
vote killa

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Uppin For More Votes Cmon Ppl Explain Ur Votes Cause Dont Want No More D/q Votes

ill return the favor with a honest vote in your battle only..If you think im better in this battle....But its aight...if you think hes better....But if ya think im better and only vote for me ill return the faovr....Vote for him.....I wont sorry....But its all good if ya want to vote for him....This is not a thing to get voes..aight...Nice battle true...I think I really beat you

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yo killa your had a good opening structure was good and the punches were ok ive seen you do better.the only thing that made you win your flow was intact. well thats to me.

ill
punches had me laughing and thats a good thing to please a king you had everything a mc would have. but your flow was off, keep evaluatin yo the WU king signing off.

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O Wut The Fuck Ppl If Ur Going To Vote Explain Ur Shit Cuz Now Its 2-0 When It Was 5-0 Cmon Ppl Hit The Votes

I know that shit is gay.. when the other person gets a gay hatred vote they dont disqualify it.. but then they disqualify our votes.. bullshit

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Cmon Ppl Dont Sleep On This Battle U Vote An Honest Vote And I Will Return The Fava

Uppin For Some Votes This Battle Was Over But Know Gay Call Back Plz Explain Votes Well

True killa:
Ill let me kepp it real, your gangsta style won't work//
Your rhymes are so boring i didn't even read your whole verse//
-okay start
Ill I look at ya rhymez and i outta-laugh//
nigga i drop so much bombs osama asked for my autograph//
-funny
This phony is still on gay shit, I shouldn't turn my back//
He might like it too much and think that Im wack//
-nice punch

okay killa had the consistent flow and kept wit it..

.ill.. u needa keep elevatin dogg.. ur startin wasnt good and neither was ur closer.. keep wit ur flow next time

vote=killa

iight thx for the vote ppl plz dont sleep on this great battle

killa yo skills have improved and i mean alot you havent lost a battle yet.
flow was good not good enough.
funny yo shit had me buggin.
structure better than before.
vocab. need to work on.

ill yo shit was good too but not good enough to meet my standards
flow better than his
funny wasnt that funny to me
structure need to work on
vocab. need to work on alot.

vote=killa

uppin for some votes cmon dont sleep ppl wake up..

This Bitch is a dumbass I see why he took so long.....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121653 he spelled my fuckin name wrong
[ you had a good idea here but this didnt flow together at all...could have hit alot harder]

This bitch is a Pycho he Think his battles goin to get him big....
But bitch Watch me becuz im about to put out the fire on ya sig....
[weak punch, pretty simple]

Nose picker if he found a treasure he would eat it like if it was a bugger...
IM dangerous becuz im goin to ripp ya so much you can call me Freddy Krauger
[weak.... what is a bugger?]

The nigga is winnin by battlin newbs..To me hes a fuckin test.....
When I get done you goin to need a replacement jaw like Kanye West...
[ok i dont get this you say hes only winning battles with newbs... and hes actually giving u a test???? .... idunno]

True Im nasty I would nutt on ya mom and she would tell you its frost...
But nigga if ya think you ever go to stay winnin well ya just lost
[weak closer... not even a punch]
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Ill let me kepp it real, your gangsta style won't work//
Your rhymes are so boring i didn't even read your whole verse//
[ ok opener... ok punches too]

Ill I look at ya rhymez and i outta-laugh//
nigga i drop so much bombs osama asked for my autograph//
[ kinda funny... osama lines are played tho]

This phony is still on gay shit, I shouldn't turn my back//
He might like it too much and think that Im wack//
[pretty weak here coulda made it hit alot harder]

Yea Ill I Know U Got Hope//
But Then U Woke Up And Said" Du Du Du Du Dats All Folks!"//
[ didnt really get this here??...]

Ill u rap like a fucking nazi//
Nigga ur raps r more boring than yahtzee//
[ weak punch, off flow]

Punches- True
Flow- ILL
Enjoyment- ILL
Content- True
Multies- True [only 1]
Vocab- neither
Structure- ILL

VOTE- TrueKilla.... this was a pretty weak battle.... both need to elevate..... multies and wordplay will come with practice but true won this with a few better punches.... Your flow was really off tho... try evening up your lines.... Neither had vocab or much multies... ILL you killed with the flow but none of ya punches were really at him cept the kanye line but thats played like monkeybars at recess... I seen you come harder in other battles.... just keep at it