uppin how else we gonna get better if we dont know how we doin??

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Bomb got it b/c he had more orig multis.and his overall flow was better.

Bomb=6.5/10
rev=4/10

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uppin uppin uppin............................................. ................................

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Revell - your shit was ok man had some good punches and the flow was good. the structure wasnt to bad eather

bamb - your shit was good but i wasnt feelin it cause of the $$ n shit man whats up you not aloud to swear???? it had a not to bad flow and structure though.

my vote goes to Revell cause he had harder punches and a better flow

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uppin ............................ lets get in over wiv

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Flow-Bomb
personals-evan
Punches-Bomb
nice battle but Bomb took it ..Up on votes in sig plz

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uppin............................................. ....

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yo bombshell did nice he had a pretty good amount of personls Punches but structure was a lil off but for da rest u did good

As for u REVEL u did bad ur flow is Exseptable but u dint RHYME so thats kinda bad you where useing kiddie Words BAM WAM!! thats some oldschool CARTOON shit

Break down:
Revel

opener:3/10
closer: 4/10
rhymes:5/10
flow: 6/10
Structure:3/10
21/50 u need to ELAVATE SOn

Break Down:

BOmbshellkilla

opener: 6/10
Closer:6/10
Rhymes: 7/10
FLow:8/10
Structure:4/10
31/50 u iight nIGGa


You HOMIES will get better u kno it lol iight 1

VOTE:BOMB

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hmmmmmmmmm,i got to give dis to bombshell whatever because his battle was by far superior with lines such as
im already pissed cause i ask for a rapper not a bitch/
have yo ass talkin like that geek of that kanye west skit/
even tho that wasnt the best line ever,it has a loose rhyme that was the best in his part.however,the rest of his thing barely rhymed.
for revell, i think he has to improve alot more because 40% of his shit didnt rhyme.but dont worry bortha youll get there.
vote: bombshellkilla or whatever his name is

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