Deleon:
tellin us to respect ya mind, nigga respect my dick/
just like i repect my trigger finger, you best respect when it twitch/
-nice start
you spit these half ass multis and think you can scoot by on somethin easy/
im readin ya rhymes and nick namin ya kraft, cuzz boy dis niggas cheesy!/
-shit that was a nice closer..

overall deleon u stayed wit ya flow, good strucutre, and great punches.. the only thing u lacked was wordplay

gotass:
U Picked The Wrong Battle Dawg U Bout To Get Bested/
Ur The Lil Nigga Thats Bout To Get Jacko Style Molested(no Homo)/
-nice start
overall thats the best line u had.. the rest i just wasnt feelin.. u tended to slip a bit but ill let that slide, ur structure was average and ur punches were average..

vote=deleon


Crew vote removed
-strobe

^^^^u Think I Dont See That Bullshit

U Came In And Said That U Cant Vote Its A Crew Vote, Then U Vote
Get The Fuck Outta Here
Fuckin Cheatin Basco Ass Herb

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THIS BATTLE WAS IIGHT


GOTTA LOOK AT THIS RAP JUST PLAIN KILLA
U Picked The Wrong Battle Dawg U Bout To Get Bested/
Ur The Lil Nigga Thats Bout To Get Jacko Style Molested(no Homo)/
Ill Rip On The Mic, Then Literally Cut This Nigga Up/
I Dont Rap, I Rape Cuz I Be Fuckin Niggas Up/
"dirty South Mafia" Aka "the Unknown Crew"/
U Weak Fuck, My Dick Spit Better Than U/
This Lil Bitch Act Like He Forgot The Battle, He Kno The Truth/
This Bitch Pissed In His Pants Soon As I Brang Up The Proof/
One Minute He A Smart Ass, Next Minute He A Retard/
"sa-town" Tryna Make The Subarbs Sound Hard/
U Wanna Be The Best, But U Too Soft Spoken/
He Undefeated, Wow, It Really Says Sumthin When U Battle Weak Opponents/
Nigga Save Ya Weak Shit, Go On American Idol/
If I Punch U In Ya Lip Itll Look Like U Went Thru A Menstrual Cycle/
U Blatantly Told Us U A Puss U Dont Have To Explain This To Me/
Ur Names Deleon/the Lion And Lions Are Cats, And Cats Is Pussy/
10/10 FLOW THE WHOLE WAY


DELEON THIS WASNT HIS BEST


tellin us to respect ya mind, nigga respect my dick/
just like i repect my trigger finger, you best respect when it twitch/
if gotta's got game, i guess pee wee hermans got it too/
i knew youd flow like Erkel since the first time i got at you!/
gotta, keep it real and tell me homie, you spit what cant-be-done--
whatchu need to do is get a grip like a masterbatin champ-ion--
look, i dont fuck wit baby shit, so fuck rattlers and diapers/
i used to be a gunman but i upgraded to sniper/
Listen son you aint nothin but a bitch to me/
Im gon drop my verse and make this kid history/
Glad you stepped up to tha plate with your call-out/
i give ya bitches 2 rounds then most you fags will fall- out/
you play wit words nice but ya shit has no flow/
bars dont even match, and wit out dat its no go/
cant get above me, but you stuck up fistin rookie/
talk about shootin gats you cant even hold one you limp wristed pussy/
im not new to the site but this "clowns-been-known"/
compared to me, these folks say it seems like you got down syndrome/
step back offa my nuts gotta, and bitch best do it slow/
you could have ten hands nigga and you still couldnt touch my flow/
you soft niggas got me shook, spittin like you somethin/
then turn around off ya comp, get in tha kitchen and make some muf-fins/
you spit these half ass multis and think you can scoot by on somethin easy/
im readin ya rhymes and nick namin ya kraft, cuzz boy dis niggas cheesy/
U COULD HAVE DONE BETTER THAN THIS BUT SINCE U DIDNT MY VOTE GOES TO GOTTA
PLZ VOTE IN ONE OF MY BATTLES BELOW

Del takes it with Punches and Flow.Nioce battle yet kinda weak.

Del=5/10
got=3/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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flow-deleon
structure-deleon
punches-deleon
vocab-tie
enjoyment-Deleon....pretty one sided @ best PeAz!

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uppin for some votes.......

uppin this shit..............

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I think I seen you guys do waaaay better than this.But you guys need more complexity and add some wordplay.Both of you had good flow.Punches would have to go to Deleon.GottA,you had some good straight up disses,but no punches.Punches are way better than the straight up diss.

Vote-DeLeon

uppin damn ive already won this shit twice!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin.................